Comments | bironic: Fic! "If You Build It (He Will Come)," SGA, John/Radek, milking machine fantasy

bironic

Fic! "If You Build It (He Will Come)," SGA, John/Radek, milking machine fantasy

Aug 17, 2011 20:13

Title: If You Build It (He Will Come)
Fandom: SGA
Pairing: Sheppard/Zelenka
Rating: Adult
Word Count: 2,300
Summary: John loses a bet but gains an opportunity to confess a long-loved kink.
Contains: Modified milking machine, pervertible, mutual porn-watching and fantasizing, talk of bondage and toys, nonjudgmental kidding around about ( Read more... )

my writing, kink bingo, sga

Comments 33

linaerys August 18 2011, 01:26:25 UTC

GAH! This was awesome. Sheppard being so turned on by it, and Radek's accurate assessment of all of it, and getting him off while talking through it--all wonderfully choreographed and very hot. Thanks for this!

bironic August 18 2011, 02:39:10 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! It took two months to brave sitting down and writing this because I was afraid I wouldn't be able to juggle the different pieces (watching, arousal, talking/fantasy) effectively, but I like how it turned out.

sabinelagrande August 18 2011, 03:15:09 UTC

Guh. I just- "guh" is the most intelligent thing I have to say right now, as my brain has melted.

bironic August 18 2011, 22:05:02 UTC

Sweet. My job here is done. (And hi, Radek, hi!)

deelaundry August 18 2011, 11:35:21 UTC

Very hot! Mmm.

(That title! I'm choosing to believe you wrote it just for me...)

bironic August 18 2011, 22:05:50 UTC

Mm, after seeing that clip I really had to write something.

And, whoops, did I accidentally steal something from you, or are we just both fans of guests in my corn Field of Dreams?

deelaundry August 18 2011, 23:00:58 UTC

You didn't steal a thing. I was referring to the title's status as a huge groaner of a pun. (Not that I don't like Let's Sit on Benches and Watch Nine Innocent, Hot Guys Play With Each Other.)

bironic August 18 2011, 23:14:09 UTC

Ahhh, that. :) My email to synn said, "Best title ever or worst title ever?" Obv. I went with "best!"

rinkafic August 18 2011, 13:51:31 UTC

Nicely done. Hot.

bironic August 18 2011, 22:06:07 UTC

Thanks!

helenkacan August 18 2011, 14:57:51 UTC

This was hot and sweet. And hot.

It's also the first John/Radek fic I've ever read.

After watching the two vids you shared, I could see how much better it could/would be for John with a willing accomplice/voyeur such as Radek. OTOH, John would have to shave to avoid friction burns.

bironic August 18 2011, 22:08:33 UTC

Hee. Lube it up well, and maybe he'd be okay.

Glad you enjoyed! penknife has written some fantastic John/Radek, mostly with dom!Radek if memory serves correctly, if you're interested in trying more.