Slapdash Struggles
Title: Slapdash Struggles
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: Romance, family, fluff
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3800
Summary: Jonghyun isn't sure if he's cut out to be a dad, but he's willing to try.
( “They’re…adoption papers?” Kibum asked, his voice breaking noticeably on the word ‘adoption’. )
So first of all, i'm so happy you posted something!! I've been missing your amazingly amazing fics ;)!!!!
Second, oh my freaking SHISUS!!!! I think you know how much I love married JongKey by now, right?!?! You have to kow I just adore it!! And now you go and do this?!?! Fluff overload!!! I love how cute they are!! And the really weird thing is that I wanted to write something similar to this, but you did a much better job than I could have VER done!!! But I do think that if JongKey got married, Key would want kids at some point and he'd get really sad and mopey about it.... So when I was reading this I was like TT^TT yes so so so true!! I also have to say I loved how you made Jonghyun a do nothing really guy and Key a super amazing designer!!! And Jonghyun will forever be my favorite hopeless romantic XD!!!
And their little boy!!! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! I was like bawling my eyes out when Jonghyun was won over by him the first time he looked at him!!! And it seems that their little boy took after Jonghyun appa with the whole ramyon love thing!!! Key would smack the Shiz out of Jonghyun if he had heard that ;D!!!! And I really liked the whole San Fran thing!! It seems like a place Key would definetely thrive in and where people are very open minded about things like homosexual parents. I liked the realism in this very much!! Like the huge stack of paper work!! All that made me feel like this was actually their life!!! ;A; THIS IS THE REALITY I WANT.
I was so happy that Jonghyun's insecurities were wrong and that he was a great appa!!!! The ending was just so heart warming!!!! TT^TT!!!
AMAZING. PERFECTION. YOU ARE AMAZING. <3<3!!!
Love,
Alys
Ps. I totally understand the stress of writing fics!!! Like right now I should probably be updating, but I saw that you had posted and I just couldn't resist ;A;!!! I look forward to all of your writing!! You are just so good at this!!! Your characters and plot lines are the best!!! Plus your grammar is always FLAWLESS!!! Emma, FIGHTING!! <3<3 miss lowly fan over here shall keep cheering you on ;)!!!
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I'm so glad you liked it. you always point out things that I actually think about for a long time, or try really hard on, so it's nice to see someone noticing things like that and commenting on it. you always reassure me. ^^
my grammar always has mistakes, though. >< I'm insecure about it because every time I reread stuff that's already posted, there are grammar errors...that I'm too lazy to fix. OTL but thank you!! ;;
you're so sweet, though, omg. you just made me feel so much more confident. :'D thank you, alys. ♥
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