Writing Bits and Pieces

[benpeek]

Today's mail brought copies of Fantasy Magazine #4 and Phantom.

A quick flip through both reveals them to be pretty cool, and with a lot of fiction in FM for the six bucks. The dialogue sections in 'Mono', my story in Phantom, however, are fucked, and so therefor it's kind of difficult to make sense out of what the characters are saying. It

Comments

[pgtremblay]

I didn't find the dialogue as presented in PHANTOM confusing at all. And I fucking absolutely loved the story, Ben. Nice work.

[benpeek]

you didn't? but in section 7, suddenly the wrong character is talking about his failing eyesight (should be the girl)... so, you know.

still, you know, if you dug it, all good. nothing wrong with it then.

:)

[benpeek]

yeah, it is. i'll email sean.

[benpeek]

cool beans :)