Thank you, Nick. Maybe you can carry out the hit I'd like to happen at State. Since you're my contact there and all.
It's not insensitive or superficial at all. Reading over it, I realize this post was a departure from the norm -- much more poetic. I enjoy that. I do a lot in my personal journal, but not so much online since it's such an impersonal medium. Maybe I'll give it another go soon enough. I have to be moved, you know?
See, I don't know if poetic is the right word. Yes, some of the stuff towards the end could be considered poetic, but what really struck me were those long, drawn out sentences in the big paragraph. They're just very well put together, and very expressive. You use intelligent vocabulary without sounding pretentious and complex sentence structure without losing meaning. If I ever become an English teacher, you're the sort of student I'd want to have in my writing class.
i was going to comment on the writing style but i see i was beaten...it sounds like a passage from a novel...i love ya suzzi!!! and whatever happened this weekend will pass. im always here. love you so much!
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I believe the website address is www.wordsmith.org.
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Even the most vitriolic have their moments. Don't deny it, Erin -- you too have an emo kid within you, weeping to be set free.
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Maybe this is the beginning of something new.
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I don't mean to be insensitive or superficial, but I really liked the way you wrote this post. Very good language. I give it an A plus.
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It's not insensitive or superficial at all. Reading over it, I realize this post was a departure from the norm -- much more poetic. I enjoy that. I do a lot in my personal journal, but not so much online since it's such an impersonal medium. Maybe I'll give it another go soon enough. I have to be moved, you know?
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But I won't quibble. Thank you for the compliment. :)
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I love you too, Mear! And if you can guess, it's what I kind of told you about over break. Same person, same situation. Rar.
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