Not Your Fault [oneshot]

[belfire]

God, forgive me. I wrote Jaeho. But it wanted out T-T

Title: Not Your Fault
Pairing: JaeHo
Genre: drama
Rating: G
Summary: Yunho falls out of love, but can’t and won’t break Jaejoong’s heart again

Comments

[fairytokyo]

;___;
So beautifully written,
yet so heartbreaking.

[belfire]

Ah, I'm sorry, I tend to write mostly angst ^^; But thank you for the beautifully written part of the comment ^__^

[hybridchickens]

waaahh... ;___; why so sad?
but i love it! it's gorgeous~ :D

[belfire]

Life is sad XD
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :D

[irerd_taga]

Sad Yunjae!! Hanging on to a love that's not there anymore, pretending that it still exists.

[belfire]

Yes, yes! Running but still standing in one place, caught in a vicious circle...

[volatileflame]

this was so beautiful! i'm so sorry your teacher ruined it for you, but seriously, this is just gorgeous. it really is a tragic cycle they're stuck in. so heartbreaking, but so beautiful.

[belfire]

Thank you so much ^^ That was the exact feeling I was aiming for, I'm glad I achieved it.

[enchanted1312]

it took me some time to realize but it's alternatives to jaejoong and yunho's point of view, isn't it?

It’s not your fault you’re so broken up.
It’s not your fault you’re slipping away.

i think the last 2 sentences just sum it up. i don't know who i should feel more, couldn't blame yunho that he doesn't want to hurt jaejoong because even in this fiction, jaejoong is so fragile, one touch and it might break. love it.

[belfire]

Yes, the point of view changes.

Thank you ^^