Thin

[beldarzfixon]

Take a step, hesitate, listen

Comments

[bleodswean]

Ah, you're a poet, too! I enjoyed this! Especially the last lines.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! I usually don't think of myself as a poet as I'm often at odds with what others think poetry *must* be. Still, I can't help myself sometimes.

[adoptedwriter]

I like this! AW

[beldarzfixon]

Thank you!

[cainle_bean]

LOVE it!!!

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks! Care to elaborate? I'm curious.

[cainle_bean]

For some reason it resonates with me. I have watched those "stronger" who could not survive when faced with the same hurdles.

And since my mother is one of my few concerns in my life (and very socially conscious) my decisions do resonate with her.

And falling does not mean failing, it sometimes means changing or reevaluating.

[beldarzfixon]

"And falling does not mean failing, it sometimes means changing or reevaluating."

Interesting, so breaking through could be breaking out. The subject of this piece seems to be stranded, perhaps facing the fears and letting the cracks open were what was needed. Hadn't thought of it that way, but then things like this are meant to be seen different ways by different people.

This reminds me of how the Death card represents change, and that it can often be for the better.

[p_m_cryan]

Food for thought.

[beldarzfixon]

Indeed.

[kagomeshuko]

Very nice.

[beldarzfixon]

Thanks!