Actually Combustion Chapter 8
The actual chapter, yes.
Not my best work but it will cut the mustard. It's now 2.30am here, this thing has taken me all day to do. Ok well not ALL day I took about an hour off to go with mum to see the USS Kitty Hawk which is currently docked here for like 3 days on a goodbye tour before heading home for decommissioning.
Shame we're not allowed on :( state secrets and all that (you know - as there are prone to be on a 40year old aircraft carrier...) :)
Anyway, here's the next chapter. Let me know what you guys think (and I said it in the chapter notes and I'll say it again - if you're all off reading Harry Potter - DON'T TELL ME HOW IT ENDS. I haven't bought it yet (like I could be bothered standing in line for hours to pick up a copy!) but when I do I want it to be a surprise! :)
Combustion Chapter 9
Oh, by the way... it's a LONG chapter... like 8000 words I think.
Not my best work but it will cut the mustard. It's now 2.30am here, this thing has taken me all day to do. Ok well not ALL day I took about an hour off to go with mum to see the USS Kitty Hawk which is currently docked here for like 3 days on a goodbye tour before heading home for decommissioning.
Shame we're not allowed on :( state secrets and all that (you know - as there are prone to be on a 40year old aircraft carrier...) :)
Anyway, here's the next chapter. Let me know what you guys think (and I said it in the chapter notes and I'll say it again - if you're all off reading Harry Potter - DON'T TELL ME HOW IT ENDS. I haven't bought it yet (like I could be bothered standing in line for hours to pick up a copy!) but when I do I want it to be a surprise! :)
Combustion Chapter 9
Oh, by the way... it's a LONG chapter... like 8000 words I think.