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[umashino]

Strange thing pop into my head after midnight I think this is the first Fiction I've really finished in a long while.

My mind keeps wrapping around this idea if Bee hadn't been taken the hover dam and was shipped to some other facility? Also I keep seeing Transformers stuck into human bodies but my mind wants it explained more then most do and

Comments

[mimi_sardinia]

Interesting idea.

I find myself wondering what they did with Bee's original body, and if the other Autobots find both it and Bee as she is now, will try to restore Bee to being an Autobot again.

Of course, that would then also bring up the question of how Sabertooth and Wolverine would react to Bee being returned to her original body.

Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

Well actually, from what I remember, Sabertooth and Wolverine are practically immmortal themselves, so a child of theirs could be as well. In that case, wouldn't it be possible for the mutant Bee to be permenantly linked up with the Autobot Bee, essentially as peripheral equipment, like an external hard drive or a printer?

And what happens with everyone else without Bumblebee there? Why haven't they attempted, or at least managed, to rescue/retrieve her? If this reality contains mutants, then are any of the Transformers cast, Sam for example, mutants as well?

Enjoyable read, well written, but just scratches the surface of an entirely different universe if left as is. Not that it has to be continued, but...

Re: Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

Well one point - if they found Bee's body after Bee got transferred to her human body, the Autobots may have come to the conclusion that Bee is dead - killed by whatever experiments were done on him.

That would make the discovery of mutant!human!Bee all the more interesting.

Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

What are the chances they would even realize that Bee was Bee at first? I mean, it's not a common name, but the likelihood of the owner of the same name being the same individual would be rather slim. Which brings up the question of how they'd realize in the first place. I suppose her vague memories would be of some aid there...

Re: Silvrei/Asterlith

[umashino]

I think I've created a rabid plot bunny?

I'm really happy you two enjoyed it. I'm guessing you two want me to work on this more to answer all your questions?

If either of you want to make sugestions or feed me idea's on what you want to see you can e-mail me at umashino @ yahoo . com or you can post them here. ^.^;

Re: Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

Well I would love to see a continuation. :)

Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

Definitely a safe guess, in this case.

Re: Silvrei/Asterlith

[umashino]

Well since you both enjoy this so much would either of you be inrested in beta reading for me? Because try as I might I seem to leave horrible grammer errors in my work. x.x

E-mail me if you'd enjoy doing this.

Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

I've never actually beta'ed anyone's work before, but editing I have done. I'm game to try, if you want.

Silvrei/Asterlith

[mimi_sardinia]

lyssabet @ aol com