Comments | becsx: Fic: The People Saw

becsx

Jan 09, 2010 22:47

Title: The People Saw
Rating: G
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None.
Wordcount: 100
Summary: The people saw, but no one spoke of it.

( The People Saw )

Comments 27

calico87 January 9 2010, 23:24:17 UTC

It was really beautiful...especially the final part made my stomach tingly:) it was short but very good:)
thank you for this fiction.

becsx January 10 2010, 18:20:35 UTC

Tingly is good! Thank you for reading :D I'm pleased you like it :)

scribblemoose January 9 2010, 23:33:05 UTC

That was good - it had a nice rhythm to it. I love repetition like that, too. Very satisfying. You crammed a lot into the 100 words. Kudos! :)

becsx January 10 2010, 18:21:48 UTC

Thank you! I was a little nervous about this since it's my first drabble so I'm very happy you liked it. :) Thanks for reading!

archaeologist_d January 9 2010, 23:45:55 UTC

I liked the repetition of it. Very effective.

becsx January 10 2010, 18:22:05 UTC

Thank you! :) Glad you liked it

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becsx January 10 2010, 18:22:13 UTC

Thanks :D

spuffyduds January 10 2010, 00:24:13 UTC

Oh, nice! A really poetic feel.

becsx January 10 2010, 18:22:43 UTC

Yay! That's what I was going for so thank you :) Glad you liked it.