Mpreg Meme!

[beckyh2112]

Because I have the crazy, and someone said something to set me off. I am still planning to finish the Crazuko Meme, it's just on hold while I deal with new job/Christmas exchanges. Also, Twelve Days of Christmas is still taking requests. I might not write your request if you ask, but I definitely won't write it if you don't ask

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You know KNOW my first request

[spyridona]

Hakoda/Ozai - No, you can't hide this one from the kids.

Long Feng/How - The one time he breaks the taboo, it comes with a curse.

I will ponder the third one.

Avatar: Hakoda/Ozai

[beckyh2112]

Hakoda has long since stopped asking how this could even happen, because Ozai's only answers are his fists. Once it was a swift-scooped toss of flaming embers. The pain from that and the slow burn of Ozai's taunts had almost led to him killing the former Firelord.

Mother had held him back. "You'll kill your child, and he'll never let you forget it."

Ozai is vicious. But the child grows, and there is no man in the Water Tribe who does not regard the former Lord with a sense of creeping horror. The child grows, and Ozai doesn't care. He walks proud and tall, head held high, only minorly inconvenienced by this strangeness

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[weirdlet]

Oooooh. Very fitting- Ozai all stiletto-tongued and sensuous, Hakoda pulling back from being provoked into things he'll regret.

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[weirdlet]

I would like to add- this is one of the ways I love well-writ mpreg, like I hate my coffee- hot, dark and bitter.

Re: Avatar: Hakoda/Ozai

[spyridona]

Because, Chief Hakoda, I will treasure the expression on your face when your child firebends.

You know, with a line like that, I have to be glad that Ozai might be going through a fair amount of pain.

I'm also very pleased that Ozai is considered a 'horror' to the men of the SWT. For many reasons, one supposes. But the combination of the symbolism of the destruction of their tribe and an 'unnatural' pregnancy really can make a SWT man shiver.

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[lunatron]

Oh gosh, I love the implication that the child is firebending from the womb and that is why Ozai isn't burned.

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[beckyh2112]

*totally glees that someone noticed*

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[littleseastar]

Gah. GAH.
The pride and the anger and the viciousness and that bit at the end... WOW.

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[beckyh2112]

... Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

Avatar: Long Feng/How

[beckyh2112]

It is just once.

Just once, and so powerful from a lifetime of little touches, heated glances, emotions sublimated into an antagonism that could break cities.

They almost do break the city. They are master earthbenders, both of them, and massively powerful. They both know this is just once, know they will never, ever get this kind of release again.

The city trembles like and with Long Feng's hands as How pushes into him.

It is just once.

But once is enough.

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[spyridona]

The city trembles like and with Long Feng's hands as How pushes into him.

I got a lovely image of Long Feng clutching green sheets of the finest cotton reading this line and pleased me entirely. And the fact despite the rumbles, those two are near silent.

Oh, How. You finally act on impulse and the Spirits aren't pleased.

Re: Avatar: Long Feng/How

[beckyh2112]

Or the spirits are very pleased. It's hard to tell with them, sometimes.