BSG Fic - Reparation, 5/?

[becisvolatile]

Title: Reparation
Author: becisvolatile
Part: 5/?
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Lee/Kara, Bill, Roslin, Helo, Sharon, Cottle, Anders, Dee, Leoben.
Word Count: 3661
Category: Novella
Genre: Romance, Angst, Action with Romance, PWP, Drama
Archiving: The Fallout Shelter, Apollo/Starbuck Fan Fic, Beyond Insane all others please ask
Warnings: Language,

Comments

[cherylad]

Well! You gotta love retribution that is swift, sure and no-frakkin'-kidding. Lee wanted to "end it with this thing" by having her clean up the mess (both literal and figurative) - well, Baby. You asked for it, you got it

[becisvolatile]

Some bits I loved, cuz all evidence to the contrary, I really am a vengeful bitch when pushed....

You know what the lamest thing is? After this I planned on having Kara be all hell-fire and whoa. And she was totally fucking subdued. I mean I kept poking her until she did something… but I almost felt as if she’d been defeated and even *I* was scared.

Kara has always walked away because she felt she was unworthy. That'd she hurt someone else eventually, so rip off the bandage now.

Your right, and until this point that’s been her standard MO… but now I think she’s walking - running - because for once that bad thing *did* happen before she could bolt.

THAT piece of work is the first time I've ever seen Kara put the blame, or the *responsibility* squarely where it belonged.You think? Because that section is largely from Lee’s perspective and I sort of have to wonder if it isn’t Lee’s own assessment of his actions

[cherylad]

Hmm.. if she felt defeated to you, that is scary.. but, I thought she was more in shock. Trying to figure out is she human or cylon? And who the hell is inhabiting Lee's body and what the frak just happened?!

Seriously though.. see, I think the balled up, semen soaked tank in the lectern where Lee will find it and GET it .. was just perfect.. Okay.. so it is a tad bit passive-aggressive .. but I just loved it for the slap it will be.

I know you were giving us a Lee-eyed-view .. but I thought the way you had her just shake her head once and turn a walk away was a VERY sharp slap of - Yes, Lee...THAT is the mistake I meant and THIS is that time.

I just love this!!!!

[becisvolatile]

THAT is the mistake I meant and THIS is that time.

When you put it like that I think yeah, that's it.

Kara here I think is more like a little kid, pulling a dogs tail again and again and now she's finally been bitten and there's that moment where her world just doesn't line up because it was never meant to bite back.

[cherylad]

That last is VERY interesting Bec.... I'm going to go think on that ......