wrapped in pink paper and tied with glittery twine (kelly/andy) pg

Aug 24, 2009 22:35


title: wrapped in pink paper and tied with glittery twine (or epiphanies for friday afternoons)
fandom: the office
character(s)/pairing(s): kelly/andy
rating: pg
word count: 140
spoilers: none.

summary: kelly makes an overdue realization.

'Wait. Explain double negatives to me again?' )

!fic: office, office fic: pairing: kelly/andy, !fic: all fandoms, office fic: character: kelly, office fic: character: andy

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slybrunette August 25 2009, 02:59:04 UTC
lol, I have no idea why I read this other than, hi, first person is rare. And rarely done well. I like it here though, it's cute and you can totally run with her, like, inner monologue. I loved the groovy. And the double negatives. It's cute and it works.

Great work!

(fyi, Britney Spears, because i'm picky like that)

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bebitched August 25 2009, 03:13:10 UTC
Well you know how much I detest writing first person, but sometimes it fits. I'm glad one of those examples is this :D

Thanks for the review!

(Ugh, fine. Fixed. But I think you're a freak for knowing that.)

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slybrunette August 25 2009, 03:16:22 UTC
Yeah, with certain characters I think it's more natural than with others.

(i'm not a freak. I read every gossip/fashion mag known to man, and, also, that's the traditional and most common way of spelling the name britney, and since i'm clearly going for maturity here *sticks out tongue*)

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bebitched August 25 2009, 03:19:43 UTC
True. I tried to do it with Sun once. DO NOT ATTEMPT.

(Psht, whatever. Considering the company I keep you should just be glad that I don't spell it 'Brittnay')

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moony88 August 25 2009, 03:48:04 UTC
Yay! I love Kelly/Andy stories =)

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bebitched August 25 2009, 14:42:24 UTC
Thanks! Me too ;)

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muic August 25 2009, 05:46:02 UTC
Gah so sweet! They seriously need more screentime together onscreen.

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bebitched August 25 2009, 14:42:54 UTC
Thank you! And agreed.

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broedym August 25 2009, 08:18:39 UTC
Adorable! Now, let's hope it becomes canon this season. Because that would be perfection.

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bebitched August 25 2009, 14:44:05 UTC
Thanks! And I am so there for that. There was a moment two seasons ago that I thought they were going there... but then it was Angela instead :/ More luck next season!

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lz1982 August 25 2009, 13:33:33 UTC
Love it, and first person is a nice change.

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bebitched August 25 2009, 14:44:52 UTC
Thanks! I rarely do first person, so I'm glad you liked it in this case.

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