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wrapped in pink paper and tied with glittery twine (kelly/andy) pg

Aug 24, 2009 22:35

title: wrapped in pink paper and tied with glittery twine (or epiphanies for friday afternoons)
fandom: the office
character(s)/pairing(s): kelly/andy
rating: pg
word count: 140
spoilers: none.

summary: kelly makes an overdue realization.

( 'Wait. Explain double negatives to me again?' )

!fic: office, office fic: pairing: kelly/andy, !fic: all fandoms, office fic: character: kelly, office fic: character: andy

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slybrunette August 25 2009, 02:59:04 UTC

lol, I have no idea why I read this other than, hi, first person is rare. And rarely done well. I like it here though, it's cute and you can totally run with her, like, inner monologue. I loved the groovy. And the double negatives. It's cute and it works.

Great work!

(fyi, Britney Spears, because i'm picky like that)

bebitched August 25 2009, 03:13:10 UTC

Well you know how much I detest writing first person, but sometimes it fits. I'm glad one of those examples is this :D

Thanks for the review!

(Ugh, fine. Fixed. But I think you're a freak for knowing that.)

slybrunette August 25 2009, 03:16:22 UTC

Yeah, with certain characters I think it's more natural than with others.

(i'm not a freak. I read every gossip/fashion mag known to man, and, also, that's the traditional and most common way of spelling the name britney, and since i'm clearly going for maturity here *sticks out tongue*)

bebitched August 25 2009, 03:19:43 UTC

True. I tried to do it with Sun once. DO NOT ATTEMPT.

(Psht, whatever. Considering the company I keep you should just be glad that I don't spell it 'Brittnay')

slybrunette August 25 2009, 03:21:52 UTC

Oh dear god. She is made for piecey, prosey third person fics.

(I was just about to say that lol. sometimes i say britt-nay spears)

bebitched August 25 2009, 03:31:42 UTC

Well I know that now. I was experimenting.

(It's a disease.)

Psssst. You should go read the Kate/Penny thing I did a week ago. I actually kinda like it.

In other news, while I was typing this comment I found that cricket. Or I guess it found me. He may have gotten away, but I have his leg!

slybrunette August 25 2009, 03:34:01 UTC

I totally will, tomorrow, since I have a crapload of free time, and am spacey atm.

Ugh, cricket. There's one in the bathroom that is like lingering in my general walking space. Fail.

bebitched August 25 2009, 03:41:39 UTC

Why don't you kill it?

slybrunette August 25 2009, 03:43:41 UTC

Because I suck at catching them and I don't want to make noise and wake up my dad. I might interrupt his self-exile...god forbid.

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