Comments | beautybecks: very torn and broken

beautybecks

very torn and broken

Oct 09, 2007 11:26

Series: Torn and Broken
Title: A Little Dead Inside
Pairing: Sam/Gene
Rating: Brown Cortina, just edging on Red
Word count: 3000 ish
Summary: Gene has a near death experience which shakes both Sam and Gene to the core: Sam clings to Gene, but Gene withdraws.
Disclaimer: nope, the characters aren't mine, I'm just playing, and breaking, I'm very accident- ( Read more... )

fandom: life on mars, rating: nc-17, series: torn and broken, fanfiction, pairing: gene hunt/sam tyler

Comments 7

angeweeks October 9 2007, 16:58:29 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! *sobs*

This is very well written; the end moved me, especially the last sentence. Looking forward to the next bit.

beautybecks October 11 2007, 09:37:52 UTC

aw, *hugs* thanks for commenting

liquorishflame October 10 2007, 08:37:59 UTC

All the characters are spot on, and Chris standing up to Litton is perfect :) And Sam watching a sleeping Gene is beautiful :) Poor Gene, he deserves lots of cuddles :(

beautybecks October 11 2007, 09:35:23 UTC

cheers, I could have hugged Chris at that point. And the beginning even made me squee. And yes, Gene does deserve hugs. Annie shall be having a word with Sam about that because you know Gene won't ask. thanks for commenting.

LOM and ASHES anonymous December 2 2008, 22:19:37 UTC

Hi I have loved your fics for ages, then they stopped don't you like A2A or Gene anymore? Shame cos you wrote really good stories. Miss you!

Re: LOM and ASHES beautybecks December 3 2008, 00:51:22 UTC

I still love Gene Hunt, how could anybody not? But real life got in the way and now I'm exploring a different fandom. Hmm, I wonder what Gene Hunt would make of the Stargate programme...

Re: LOM and ASHES anonymous December 4 2008, 14:55:15 UTC

Well I do hope one day you write more LOM fic. Phils new show Demons is coming out on Jan 3rd. Looks very good lots of scope for fan fics me thinks!