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She Loves You?

Jun 20, 2009 13:16

Title: She Loves You? PART 12
Author: macca44552
Pairing: J/P, G/OC, P/OC
Rating: NC-17

Summary: A naive fan, thinking that she is going to win the heart of Paul McCartney, walks into something quite odd...

A/N: There’s some stuff about religion in this one. It is just fiction. It doesn’t reflect my personal views. For the most part, everything is ( Read more... )

paul/other, het, george/other, john/paul

Comments 23

miniluv86 June 20 2009, 18:33:42 UTC

I love this series. First off, Kara's p.o.v, while completely annoying and stuck up, is youthful and naive and totally believable. At times you feel sorry for her and other times, you just want to smack her in the head with something. Your portrayal of the Beatles is pretty spot on, blinding snark with enigmatic charm.

macca44552 June 21 2009, 04:04:42 UTC

Thank you! :D

I'm glad that you think my portrayl of The Beatles is pretty spot on! I was worried about making them seem too immature.

I'm glad that you like this series!

ojos_preciosos June 20 2009, 18:46:59 UTC

This is great. I like how Kara's been able to break John, sort of.

He thinks she's ok. I guess that shows how much she's changed since the beginning.

And, what's the worst John can do? I dread to think haha. xD

I'm not sure about her whole let's make John and Paul admit they love each other thing, but I'm sure you'll write whatever is about to happen really well. I'm interested to see where it's going from here. :)

Aww but she still wants to be a bitch to George. Poor Georgie. :(

Hope she grows out of that too! And I really liked your LSD trip description, sounded real, from what I've read and heard anyways. The part with them all dancing around Paul in very dodgy fashions was hilarious. I can totally see that. :P

Great job though, hope you update again soon! :)

macca44552 June 21 2009, 04:13:58 UTC

It's been a difficult process, but Kara has changed since the beginning!

The whole lets make John and Paul admit that they love each other thing stems from Kara's need to control their relationship. That will be explained later.

The LSD trip was pretty strange to write. I basically decided to write whatever strange things came to my head at 4 in the morning. It produced some pretty interesting results. I went back to read the LSD part and I was lke "what the hell is this?" lol

Thanks for reading!

ringoisim June 20 2009, 20:19:45 UTC

Whats the worst he can do?
Ugh oh.

:3 I loved this chapter and the acid trip.

macca44552 June 21 2009, 03:57:00 UTC

Ugh oh is right.

You will see that in the next chapter! :D hehehe

corleoned June 20 2009, 20:27:18 UTC

“A Catnishpull is an animal with the head of a cat, a body that is similar looking to a Danish, and an ass that juts out like a pulley,” XD

-holds one up promptly- OBVIOUSLY.

macca44552 June 21 2009, 03:51:20 UTC

LOL!!

I almost died laughing at this comment! XD

corleoned June 21 2009, 03:53:05 UTC

-grins as she pets hers lovingly- Don't know what everyone's getting worked up about. I see 'em all the time xD -cradles hers lovingly- His name is Norbert XD

macca44552 June 21 2009, 03:56:00 UTC

I want one! Why the fuck didn't I get one? :D

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sunsetsoverlove June 21 2009, 02:36:25 UTC

Afgsdagklj :| you're such a teaser! Oh my. This is still really fab, I can never waht for the next one so I don't know what I'll do when it's finished >.< I thought toe bit where they're talking about John being old is really spooky O.o

Anyway, well done! I reeeally want to read some more now!

macca44552 June 21 2009, 03:54:51 UTC

Yay! Thanks for reading! :)

I know what you mean about the part with John talking about himself as an old man. That part sort of wrote itself, and when I went back to reread it I was like...oh.

But I liked it, even though it made me feel a little sad. :(