Dear Boss [Chapter One]

[corleoned]

Title: Dear Boss [Chapter One]
Author: Corleoned (Me XD)
Pairings: John/ Paul, Slight Paul/Ringo
Rating: R for murder, slums, graphic descriptions of violence, and angry mansex. 14-A for this chapter.
Summary: The late August of 1888 bridged the gap between modern violence and Victorian innocence, the idealism of Victorian society shaken to it's core

Comments

[withalittlewit]

GOD. I totally love this. So, so much. You have FANTASTIC characterization. And I love how the prologue was so mysterious, and this one sheds a little bit more light. WHO IS THE KILLER?

and forgive me wondering, but isn't Ringo ambidextrous? :O

[corleoned]

Thank you -flushes- :3 I hope to post more soon.

I believe he is I wouldn't know -shiftyeyes- XDDDD

[miss_warina]

I AM LOVING THIS!! XD

[corleoned]

|D He's meant to be. He's an upperclass Englishman in the 19th century, he had to be XD

And actually, this is simply telling the sighting of the first night Paul saw John from John's point of view. John wouldn't have known that when he was telling the story that Paul had picked up the woman's body, so I think it's a stable point there ;)

XDDDD Mine always went to Mary Kelly, for the sheer horror of the scene XD -shudders-

Oh, thanks! I'm a history nerd too XD -highfives for the H-nerds- |D

[miss_warina]

No worries ;D

Ohhhh Mary Kelly, I always feel so bad for her =/ That photograph really creeps me out. Sometimes when I'm reading in casebook.org or some book that has her photograph, I look at it and change the page very quickly and think: shit, why did I look?! XD And I've seen that photograph lots of times hehehe
But I don't know I'm still with Stride and Eddowes ^^

YEY!! History nerds! \o/

[xxinlovebutlazy]

This is so mysterious; I absolutely adore it. I wish I could create the air of intrigue as you do, it's fabulous.

Cannot wait for more! <3

[corleoned]

-blushes- Oh you XD -huggles-