Dear Boss [Chapter One]

[corleoned]

Title: Dear Boss [Chapter One]
Author: Corleoned (Me XD)
Pairings: John/ Paul, Slight Paul/Ringo
Rating: R for murder, slums, graphic descriptions of violence, and angry mansex. 14-A for this chapter.
Summary: The late August of 1888 bridged the gap between modern violence and Victorian innocence, the idealism of Victorian society shaken to it's core

Comments

[miss_warina]

I AM LOVING THIS!! XD

Paul is a little arrogant isn't he? =P

The only part I didn't like was when Paul said about the girl's head rolling of cause that never happened. Buuuuuuut, totally ignore me because I'm very bitchy about details but that doesn't change my liking to this story. You got me completely hooked! XD

Polly Nichols used to make me nervous when I was little because in her photograph her eyes were still kinda open, but now the nervous title passed to Elizabeth Stride and Catherine Eddowes. Simply because if Catherine had stayed in prison through the night, like one pc wanted, she wouldn't be killed; and in the case of Liz Stride, one guy saw Jack the Ripper attack her and didn't do a thing! He could at least have searched for a policeman ¬¬ Knowing that people could be alive because of one simple choice makes me very nervous... I'm crazy I know XD

You mentioned Emma Smith! No one talks about her! It's always the canonical five ¬¬

And, I'm loving those historical notes you're giving us. I'm a history geek so I'm sorry if sometimes I keep talking and talking, kinda like what I'm doing now! I can't help it hehehe

So, to finish, because you're now probably tired of my rambling, I'm waiting anxiously for the other part, you're doing a very good job with this and again I'm loving it =D

[corleoned]

|D He's meant to be. He's an upperclass Englishman in the 19th century, he had to be XD

And actually, this is simply telling the sighting of the first night Paul saw John from John's point of view. John wouldn't have known that when he was telling the story that Paul had picked up the woman's body, so I think it's a stable point there ;)

XDDDD Mine always went to Mary Kelly, for the sheer horror of the scene XD -shudders-

Oh, thanks! I'm a history nerd too XD -highfives for the H-nerds- |D

[miss_warina]

No worries ;D

Ohhhh Mary Kelly, I always feel so bad for her =/ That photograph really creeps me out. Sometimes when I'm reading in casebook.org or some book that has her photograph, I look at it and change the page very quickly and think: shit, why did I look?! XD And I've seen that photograph lots of times hehehe
But I don't know I'm still with Stride and Eddowes ^^

YEY!! History nerds! \o/