Exploring George---Chapter Thirty-Seven

[larainefan]

Title:  Exploring George---Chapter Thirty-Seven
Location/Time:  Times Square/1960s-1970s
Rating:  PG13?
Pairing:  John/George; mention of past Paul/George
Genre:  Confrontations
Author:  larainefan/Alicia Mills
Warnings:  language, anger, mention of sexual situations
Disclaimer:  Not the real Beatles, characters portrayed are only loosely inspired by

Comments

[macca44552]

Aww! I felt badly for Ringo here! He was trying to help George, but the latter was withdrawn and cold-ish. Look what you've done to him John!!!!! You need to leave him alone for a little while!

And holy *****! The part where Paul told John about having George first...I thought that John was going to flip out a lot more than he did. Thankfully, he saw reason and controlled himself. Oh, and when Paul told John that stuff...I got the feeling that Paul did that out of jealousy. BUT...was he jealous because John was doing that to George, and Paul wanted to be the only one to mess with him in that way, or was he jealous because of John's new-found fascination with George and he felt like second best?? Or am I just rambling on nonsensically?

Oh, you write Paul really well. His heart is in the right place, yet he masks all this with his aloof 'Liverpudlian boys don't show any emotions' self. Irritating, it is. But it's one of the fine traits that make up Mr. James P. McCartney.

Erm. I loved this part! I can't wait until the next one! How many parts is this story going to have? I hope it's loooooooooooooong. :D

[larainefan]

Ringo didn't get too far here, but don't count Ringo out yet, lol! And actually it's mostly you and Dooleynoted that is taking the story in a whole new direction, from the beginning encouraging me to add more Ringo. And now I've been watching more George/Ringo Beatles footage, and seeing more, my eyes have been opened!

John didn't flip out more because I can't write a good violence scene, I hate violence, so if John reacted kind of lukewarm, that is due to my laziness/inability, lol!

Thank you and hihopes for saying I managed to write Paul well. It's hard to pin him down, he's the Beatle I feel the least connection with, though I do realize his importance within the group.

I'm thinking 3 or 5 more chapters of this? Then maybe a sequel?