Title: Exploring George---Chapter Thirty-Seven
Location/Time: Times Square/1960s-1970s
Rating: PG13?
Pairing: John/George; mention of past Paul/George
Genre: Confrontations
Author: larainefan/Alicia Mills
Warnings: language, anger, mention of sexual situations
Disclaimer: Not the real Beatles, characters portrayed are only loosely inspired by
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That’s so sad. Of course you see it with couples sometimes, when they become so immured in each other that they cut off everything and everybody else. And this is even more intense. And I agree that in real life, George really was a dichotomy.
But now George was fading, and Ritchie knew it had to do with John's manipulations. George looked drawn and weary and emaciated, and so unhinged he could fly away. All the spirit had gone out of him.
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He was damaged goods.
:( Both of those made me want to cryyyy! So George isn’t only becoming withdrawn around John, but Ritchie too. I guess that’s to do with how John is using him - basically as his own little “sex slave” as he joked earlier. I mean, I know John has true feelings for George, but George doesn’t know that. Owww. =( Johnny needs to let him out… let him do something ELSE for a while!
JOHHHHNNN, you’ve MESSED him up!!!
Sure, George had his good traits, ( ... )
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George being sexy?! Haha! Yes, though most of us here love George, most either see him as sexy, or not, there's no in-between, it seems. On another forum so many females are George lovers that one guy posted saying If women think George is good-looking, maybe there's hope yet for all men! Lol! (But count me as among the ones who find him very attractive/handsome/sexy)!
Thank you for saying I was handling the writing of Paul, I wasn't sure. That means a lot!
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It's really sad how George seems to be a shadow of his former-self thanks to John's obsession. And sad how he thinks him liking John is some sort of illness. I like Ritchie and Paul's concern for him, I feel it. He really needs a bit of proper care. And sleep by the sounds of it.
I could feel the tension in the first part, of him and John having been caught.
Love it. Look forward to whatever is coming next....!
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I don't think it's the homosexual aspect that George thinks is sick, he knows it's not healthy for he and John to be so wrapped up in one another, and John's obsession is to the detriment of the other areas of George's life, yet George willingly comes back for more. But I had to write it like that so it was more consensual, and not just George being taken advantage of---if that makes sense!
I'm glad you say you "felt" the concern of Ritchie and Paul, and "felt" the tension; very encouraging to get feedback like that!
I'm going to miss your story when you're finished!
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xD
George wants to stay, 'eh?
*excited*
Poor Ritchie tho.
Can't wait for you next update, love.
Adore this story.
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John didn't flip out more because I can't write a good violence scene, I hate violence, so if John reacted kind of lukewarm, that is due to my laziness/inability, lol!
Thank you and hihopes for saying I managed to write Paul well. It's hard to pin him down, he's the Beatle I feel the least connection with, though I do realize his importance within the group.
I'm thinking 3 or 5 more chapters of this? Then maybe a sequel?
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