Eros (9/?)

[be_radical]

 CHAPTER 9

As soon as onew left Amber’s house he ran, he ran as fast as he could. His heart was pounding in his chest and sweat was pouring down his face. After a while his lungs were screaming at him, and his muscles were burning but he knew that if he didn’t do this now he would never have the courage again.

Onew had done a lot of thinking, about

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[sourremon]

Firstly, I'd like to thank you for spotting me. I feel very honored for that special place. Really, thanks ;a; Then I'd like to say sorry for my late comment.. Ugh, I'm the fail here.. you have posted this almost two weeks ago and I'm being such a slow ass OTL

Don't think in ANY way that you're a fail e__e I'm not a native English speaker, I barely use it in every day life but believe me I do notice when a fic has bag grammar or spelling. It's just a turn off for the reader but your fics are FAR from that, really, really far. Your stories are amazing, your writing correct and understandable and your characters amazingly portrayed. All in all your fics are captivating and really enjoyable to read. I'm very happy I found your blog :')

This chapter was so interesting I don't even know what to say.. I didn't expect that twist at all. I like it but poor 2min.. now it's their relationship that is in danger :( I really like Taemin here though. The way he told Minho that they can do it awwh :') I hope that they will keep that thought in mind and fight for their love. Ugh stupid parents.. but yeah arranged marriages were something absolutely normal during those times :(

So.. keep the great work you're doing. I will forever love this fic <3 can't wait to see what happens next ^^;;

[be_radical]

You're amazing~ this made me so happy! >.< I'm just really glad that someone likes my writing, and I feel guilty that I don't update this fic a lot, but this made me feel a whole lot better. I always say i'll try to update sooner but I really will try hard...sometimes I just get writers block, or I get tired of this story or any other reason. I just...thank you so much! Really, you're amazing it doesn't matter if you comment late or if you don't comment because you've already helped me so much! <3 I appreciate you so much...XD just, thank you so much~ <3 <3

[sourremon]

Don't feel guilty. I know that updating isn't easy at all especially when studying not to mention author blocks which are an awful pain in the ass. I update my journal once in a couple of months OTL i.e. for me, you're really fast in updating!

I will forever support you and your writing <3 You're the amazing person here <3 but thank you, idek how are you so nice ;a; I'll try my best to comment even if there's the smallest chance for that to motivate you :)

Take care <3