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Secret Santa 2009 - Fic Prompt 13 - An Unwanted Brother

Jan 19, 2010 04:50

Title: An Unwanted Brother (Part 2)

Author/Artist: Fairly Felonious

Prompt: 13. An alternate universe where a child/younger Joker is in the care of Bruce. I don't know why but I just wanna see it. Bruce is having trouble because the kid is such a little hooligan. (bothering Alfred/breaking things. Maybe constantly pestering/antagonizing a little ( Read more... )

author: fairlyfelonious, genre: angst, rating: pg, genre: crack/humour, secret santa 2009 fic

Comments 13

newbluemoon January 19 2010, 11:04:53 UTC

Oh my god. D'aaaaw. Baby Joker is so cute. I wanna cuddle him but I'd probably get blown up. :| Lol, I don't even like kids, but he's seriously the most adorable thing ever. I love this story.<3

fairlyfelonious January 19 2010, 21:13:31 UTC

Lol, don't worry; he doesn't wear dynamite, yet. Isn't that what he wore in the pencil-trick scene in the movie? From all the reading I've had to do on explosives because of Baby Joker, I've come to realize how dangerous explosives are just to put together and handle. And here I thought the Joker didn't care about his own life before I knew that.

Baby Joker, on the other hand, just doesn't know how dangerous the things he's handling are, and doesn't understand danger the way adults do. And I'm glad I succeeded at making him adorable. It was surprisingly natural to transform him in that way, even when the adult version really shouldn't incite reactions like 'cute' and 'aw'.

katty4u January 19 2010, 11:13:43 UTC

I really like this, but where is Part One? I'm going to scan back & see if I can find it. Maybe you could put the links to previous chapters to make it easier to finds. Just a suggestion.

I love how their friendship is almost like a sibling love/hate relationship and I am enjoying Bruce's desire to protect Jack.

I'm curious to see what unfolds.

fairlyfelonious January 19 2010, 21:02:44 UTC

It's just a short prologue, and you can find it on my author page. I'll put another link at the top of the page, though.

Yeah, their love/hate relationship evolved into sibling-hood with surprising ease ; ) As for Bruce's need to protect Jack, I'm pretty sure that one of his reasons for becoming Batman is his unreasonable belief that he could have protected his family, somehow. He's transferred his need to protect to Jack, and I'm leaving you to guess whether or not this alters his future decisions, any.

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fairlyfelonious January 20 2010, 03:36:07 UTC

Yeah, where else but Wayne Manor could he get in trouble by exploring the family armory?

As for who will try to get revenge, perhaps you're right. I honestly don't think Bruce would risk prison to to kill Joe Chill if it meant leaving his only remaining family alone, but Jack might. I'll have to see where my muse takes me.

sweetcarolanne January 19 2010, 12:07:46 UTC

This is so delightful. I hope there's more! <3

fairlyfelonious January 20 2010, 03:40:47 UTC

Thanks! I hope so, too ; )

littleblacklily January 19 2010, 23:09:56 UTC

“Alfred, Jack made something explode again!”
lol omg, I see Brucie pouting <3<3<3

"Alfred had lost his hearing in one ear after the kitchen incident last year."
rofl. you are evil XD

and little Brucie flapping his hands... omg cuuuute

and you made Alfred curse XDDDDDDD

and... and... they are so cute, babyJoker is a little cutesy evil thing, and I totally love him.

and than... you almost made me cry when poor little Jackie thought he would be thrown out for his "experiment".
and Brucie is such a good brother after all...
I luv this story <3
keep on writing, I'm already waiting the new chap <3

oh, maybe I'm just too exhausted, but I laughed a lot while reading :) and than almost cried, and laughed again, just to be raged by the injustice in the end. but... at least, this time they has eachother...
thanks for the experience :D
and sorry for incoherency. it's past midnight, and after a long-long study-session

fairlyfelonious January 20 2010, 04:03:31 UTC

Yeah, Brucey's good at pouting. He's a little spoiled, lol ( ... )

littleblacklily January 20 2010, 18:03:57 UTC

haha. "Chaos meets British ettiquette." so true... I almost regret now that I not included Alfred into my fanfic XD
I want to write it so bad, and I can't since I have two more exams in two days T_T

Also my very emotional reaction can be the result of my neverdying love for Joker - I was upset because of the cruelty of his father (also have a couple of friends who have more or less the same problem - inferiority complex caused by their worthless fathers whom I hate with passion...) touchy subject, you see? :)
nevertheless I love your pair of brothers, and I hope they will cope better together than Brucie had on his own.
<3
*back to studying literature* :(

fairlyfelonious January 20 2010, 20:06:27 UTC

Yeah, I've had a few friends with fathers like that. It was enough to make me hate them, too, when I saw how my friends were affected. So yeah, it's a touchy subject for me, too, even though I haven't seen those particular friends for a while (we lost touch after high school). They were part of my inspiration for baby!Joker's behavior, actually.

Good luck with your exams.