Comments | basisforming: God Knows Even Angels Fall 16/?

basisforming

God Knows Even Angels Fall 16/?

Apr 12, 2011 22:25

Title: God Knows Even Angels Fall
Pairing: Santana/Brittany
Rating: PG-13 this chapter.
Summary: AU. Finished with her tour, Brittany's back in the States with an obligation to fulfil. She isn't too sure how to go about it, or if she even wants to- Especially once she gets to know Santana.
Warnings: Character death from 1st chapter
Spoilers: Bits and ( Read more... )

gkeaf, brittany/santana, fic

Comments 22

sweetsicksister April 12 2011, 14:37:51 UTC

I have a feeling Brittany is a walking time bomb. She seems calm ,as much as someone can be calm after being at war. But on the other hand... Don't know.
Thanks for update, waiting for more :)

basisforming April 13 2011, 22:48:50 UTC

Because Brittany is totally zen! Heh, I can see her meditating before Santana wakes up in the mornings then crawling back into bed.

You are very welcome, thank YOU for reading!

sweetsicksister April 14 2011, 13:40:43 UTC

Yes, you should put it in your story! Brittny all zen and meditating would be so cool! And it could explain her calm. Cuz sometimes I think "why isn't she screaming, she should hate and scream and don't trust people be hard bitter and guarded like hell. Why she's still so innocent and good, she was at war after all". And than I think I'm stupid, like "Cuz she's Britz. She would feed ducks in the middle of bombing" :D

basisforming April 17 2011, 09:22:18 UTC

Haha, yeah, sometimes I forget that what I think doesn't make it on paper and confuses readers. Oops.

And that's true. You don't really need more reason than "It's Brittany, bitch."

creedogv April 12 2011, 18:20:39 UTC

I don't know what the online equivalent of "impossible to put down" is. I long for the chapters with Ghost Puck, because it's always so revealing when you show both Santana's and Brittany's POV's. I got to say everyone in glee club are massive tools; you'd think they'd want Brittany to share stories instead of loading her up with survivor's guilt. Santana's a massive bitch back to them, but they kind of deserve it.

basisforming April 13 2011, 22:51:00 UTC

Aw, high praise indeed!

I like writing Puck, but whenever he appears people are all "stupid Puck!" and I get all ): because no to Puck hate! haha.

Don't write the glee club off; they aren't all that horrible. :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

wkgreen April 12 2011, 20:16:18 UTC

Yes! We got to see what happened between Gleeks and Santana. Santana should have dropped the anvil on Lauren!

Waiting for more :)

basisforming April 13 2011, 22:52:10 UTC

Well see, it's kind of hard to find anvils in modern day times. Loony Tunes seem to have used up the world's supply of anvils.

haha, thanks for your comment!

lizzylizbian April 13 2011, 04:07:19 UTC

it was so great finally finding out what happened. and i enjoyed the change in perspective. what I didn't enjoy was the author's note alluding to this ending soon. i was so excited to see an update and... WHAM! 3 chapters??? :(

seriously though, loved this chapter. some of the dialog was hysterical (especially w/san + lauren). and quinn being sad was just heartbreaking. and i really loved at the end, the interaction between quinn and san. it was described so perfectly.

really really great. i can't compliment you enough.

basisforming April 13 2011, 22:56:18 UTC

NOOOO I meant 3 chapters for which I had definite outlines for! Then probably a couple more after that to wrap up some loose ends. I'm entertaining ideas of a sequel since this fic is definitely not going to go beyond the one summer, so... I don't know. We'll see!

Santana and Lauren have so much potential for the show. But, like so many things in Glee, let's just skip over everyone and focus on Kurt.

I like Quinn. I legit like her character so much even though she's pretty much a douche. And again, she needs character development but no, let's spend all that time on Kurt instead. *grouses*

YEAH WELL. I can't glomp your face enough for all the nice things you say. Quit making me blush, woman!

sadako_mcfly April 14 2011, 03:10:44 UTC

Ohmigod, not enough to satiate my hunger. And let me tell you, miss basisforming, I'm starving for more of everything this story and its characters chose to be! @_ ( ... )

basisforming April 17 2011, 10:10:42 UTC

Man, miss basisforming is such a mouthful and makes me feel all awkward, haha. Call me Li. (:

High praise, high praise!! You're going to get my head all huge and bloated, sheesh! (but srsly, danku.)

Unfortunately for all adultkind, I use 'your face' way too much. The society of grownups should disown me, and soon.

Forgive you for? I AM SO CONFUSED NOW. AUGHHHH. *flails*

Chang (squared) are amazing. Power to the Asians! ...heh heh heh.

HAH. Well, see, I like your rants! They honestly make me grin and feel all pleased and fuzzy inside. So... Power to you!