"Obsession" chapter two

[ziltzy]

Well, here's chapter two. I tried to pull for a long chapter like the last one, but some of it still needs some definite tweaking, because I dont feel just right about it yet. Therefore, I didnt include part of it in this chapter and the result is about 1000 words less than Chapter One. I hope you enjoy it regardless

Comments

[epiks13]

GAH!

I'm not sure how i feel about Alice.....

but i likes this story!
more please.
thank you.

[dementia9]

I think one of the girls will be obsessed. Although having said that, we haven't really been introduced to Stephanie yet, so.... we shall see. More, please!

[checkmatey]

I think Alice will be obsessed with Bam.
Who wouldn't be?

[ziltzy]

haha ^-^ yeah she doesnt stand a chance against he aweomse power of Bam eh?