Those Ah-ha! Moments

[baka_kit]

I got over 500 words into the scene before I realized what was wrong; I was telling it from Esther's POV when this particular scene had to be from Zahi's point of view. Since he and Kareemah are getting into an argument, and he's taking the most active role here.

So. Scrapping those words, back to the beginning.

This entry was originally posted at http://kit-r-writing.dreamwidth.org/491846.html. Please comment there using OpenID.