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Nikki/Helen - 3 drabbles
Apr 22, 2006 17:59
Title: Guilt
Author:
giantessmess
Pairing: Nikki/Helen
Rating: PG
Words: 100
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cabenson
April 22 2006, 13:36:05 UTC
Oooooh....Bad Girls=LOVE!!
Very well done!
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theholyinnocent
April 22 2006, 18:24:59 UTC
Love 'em! Very nice use of the second person to capture Helen's POV and all of her lingering (yet strong) doubts about Nikki & their relationship.
Maybe she actually believes you’d defy the law for her.
Yeah, that was the scene when I felt bad for Nikki. Like, hello? You're in love with a woman who goes by rules...
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projectcyborg
May 13 2006, 06:52:12 UTC
oooh, nice job with the 100-words-exactly! I love Helen's chilling, inexorable sense of the tragedy of them that you capture so succinctly.
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Very well done!
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Maybe she actually believes you’d defy the law for her.
Yeah, that was the scene when I felt bad for Nikki. Like, hello? You're in love with a woman who goes by rules...
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