Wait, what?

[ze_zana]

Lost in the Darkness, a Death Note fanfic...it doesn't make sense until you've read the whole thing first, and even then, it's only the general plot line that becomes clear. Written by a supposedly twenty year old American and for some reason labeled as an adventure/humor, the story starts off with Light and a little blind girl he literally bumps

Comments

[ladyassassin27]

He notices that she was looking around with a worried loon on her face.
She had a worried LOON on her face? wtf?lol
The way I see it, this could mean her worried expression made her look looney OR
She had a actual loon on her face.

[darkangel_wings]

I liked the mental image of a girl sitting there with a worried loon for some reason sitting on her face. So I went with that one.

[ze_zana]

The way I saw it, the loon was tied to her face, hence why it was worried. -nods-

[ladyassassin27]

Second option it is then! lol

RP journal

[traitors_fate]

And considering she's, I don't know, BLIND, why's she looking around at all?

Re: RP journal

[ladyassassin27]

Maybe she was not in fact looking around, but was attempting to get the loon of her face? By moving her head side to side? *shrugs*