IT HAD ME AT THE SUMMARY...

Jul 02, 2008 12:53

We all carry scars. Not all of them are visable, and some show themselves in unexpected ways.
Highly intelligent dead skin shows up when you least expect it.

Rating for mild language....
I take this as "a form of communication was slightly used or hinted at."

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I haven't visited FF.NET since the 90's... I just lost interest. bad_fic got me interested to check it out again, and found this one easy...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4364885/1/An_Alternate_Future
From what I could make of it, its about Trunks and the authoresses' (of course, a Mary Sue..) unprecedented time travel in the recorded history... as far as we know.



Author's Note goes:
Warnings: Mild, infrequent language. Violence.
And in between are things that aren't part of language or communication. There we go again with the Mild Language Used here... Points though for being consistent.

If Trunks was nervous, he sure didn’t show it

If Trunks was nervous, he sure didn’t show it. I had to admit, I wasn’t nearly as calm as he seemed to be.
Er, I heard you the first time.

Trunks shook his head, his hair falling into his eyes at the movement.
Yeowch! Trunks should consider another shampoo... And maybe tweezers to get the hair out of his eyes?

I shook my head.
Careful shaking that pretty head of yours... your hair might fall off too... INTO YOUR EYES! ~_~

Er... Forgive me... this is where I got lost.It was such a long Chapter, and I have ADD... Moving on to Chapter two, where the author starts with...

I was such an idiot

I was such an idiot...

HEHEHEHEHHEHEHEHEHE, MY THOUGHTS EXACTLY.

dragon ball z

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