May 03, 2008 10:45
This is my first time posting to this lovely board and boy have I got a doozy.
The sporking will be in bold just like I've seen other people do.
First off: The Summary!
- ok, yea the worst title, o well. sam and dean have been fighting alot lately and after a hunt sam gets sick. well...thats about it. its alot better than it sounds so. ENJOY!
I wish, truly wish that this was not the summary. No capital letters at all and o instead of oh? *head, desk, smash, smash.*
- "Chill, Sammy. If he decides to show his face," Dean held up his gun, "I'll blow his balls off," the oldest said with a smile and got back to work.
He's a ghost, has no use for balls. How about smirk instead of smile? Dean doesn't smile, he's smirks! Unless he's drunk.
he was sent flying again by the 'easy-to-heal' ghost,
Ghosts are dead. Lack of healing they do not possess cause they is dead.
(Ha! That's a funny one. LMAO)
I'm not kidding this was in the story. LMAO. No, no, no, no, no.
That's it, I'm done. I read the story and cried. Now I run away to read some smut.
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