Jan 19, 2011 21:42
Tenth Doctor whump is delicious. I love it. But redundancy is never good.
The Doctor screamed and screamed and screamed and screamed and screamed and screamed and screamed and screamed.
Yes, but was he yelling?
The author uses variations of the word 'scream' fifteen more times (screaming, screamed, and scream!) within the five short paragraphs which follow the eight original screams.
A thesaurus isn't a dinosaur, my friend. You can find one at your local bookstore.
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