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Buffy the Vampire Slayer fanfic. Premise: Buffy and Angel are sent back in time to before Angel was a vampire. The world has been slightly altered so that Buffy (AKA Anne) and Angel (AKA Liam) are engaged. The following are small clips of what takes place on their wedding night:
Be aware: Lots of bad sex under the cut.
A hard cock can only slide over the entrance to a buttery warm vagina for so long before its owner loses control and it has to push inside.
Buttery... warm... vagina D:
... he rests all his weight on one elbow and without looking slips a hand between them. Tries to avoid his own pistoning shaft as he further parts the soft flesh and reaches in to find her pleasure centre.
A busy erection coupled with smugly knowing fingers seem to be enough. She's clutching at him ferociously, with her hands and with the powerful walls of her core. She's trying to draw him in further, an instinctive feature of human biology as the large male she's chosen as her mate tries desperately to bring her to her pleasured peak.
Are we reading the Discovery Channel now?
"Show me Buffy, show me how alluring you are in the throes of orgasm," he beseeches her.
It’s always been a dream of mine for someone to say that in bed with me.
Gaze trained on her, it only takes a few more deep rounds of penetration she obviously can't resist before it happens.
Her body still tremors with aftershocks but he no longer has the faculties to play with her slick button. For the first time almost in his memory hot, living seed spurts out of him in blissfully relieving bursts.
Straddling his upper chest she feels the press of his strong developed pectoral muscles flexing beneath her dampening slit. He's eagerly clasping at her back, drawing her down further and making appreciative moaning sounds as he suckles at her, tonguing her big dollar-sized nipples like he's going to find heaven.
...dollar-sized? If you’re going to compare nipples to the size of a coin, at least pick one that people actually use.
Buffy reaches down, finds Angel's dark man-nipples and slowly fingers them as he teases her.
"You have big, luscious nipples sweetheart," he tells her, breaking a silence permeated only by the occasional crackling log as he switches between them.
Clearly the author is a fan of nipples
"You're so creamy baby," he tells her in wonder, looking over her mouth appreciatively before he locks on and shares the taste of her cum with her, forgoing presenting her the choice as he slides his coated tongue against hers.
....yech
"And your cock is monstrous," she gasps, her toes curling as, like before, it keeps going in.
"I'm so sorry," he groans, as if just understanding what he said. "My mouth isn't connected to my brain, you just feel so good, and I can taste your cum on my tongue. And your tits look fake, they're so fantastic - Mmmm. Buffy."
just.. WUT. In what world is telling someone their tits look fake a compliment?!
The warning that her core is ready for more makes him supersensitive to the restraint his appendage is under.
Or, to clear things up: His dick is still in his pants, and it hurts.
x-posted to weepingcock because it needed to be.