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Aug 21, 2010 16:18


Badfics! The Genetic Opera

presents:

How not to write GraveRobber

Grilo Badfic Edition

Warning NC-17. Contains awful, awful sex!

NSFW YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!

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repo! the genetic opera

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anasazidarkmoon August 21 2010, 21:39:32 UTC
I've never seen Repo, but now that I've run into this, I don't think I want to. Last thing I need is to get into yet another fandom overrun with badfic.

Funny spork, though.

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tomato_dance August 21 2010, 22:25:23 UTC
WHY do you keep doing this to yourself.
Also.
Shilo: that answer might work on a scalpel slut you just met on the street but I've been around you for six months now, I know when you are trying to bullshit me, and I know you don't do anything without a reason
Graverobber playfully pointed at Shilo.
Graverobber (mockingly): ohhhh Shilo said a swear.

Did they really use script format? I didn't know that was that common... :|

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alchemistpotion August 22 2010, 15:22:49 UTC
100% unaltered badfic reporting is always my goal. So yes, they really used 'script format', though as someone who's written in script format before, I can say that hardly resembles it.

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alchemistpotion August 23 2010, 13:59:13 UTC
Yep. They caramelize.

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matthias_wave August 22 2010, 02:48:37 UTC
Am I the only one who went and fixated on them saying "gods" in that last one? Repo's supposed to be set more or less on Earth, right? Even nonreligious people on modern Earth, if they refer to divine beings when they swear, are probably more likely to refer to "God" than "gods" - Christianity's influence is surprisingly pervasive. Heck, I'd generally assume someone from a polytheistic religion (do we have any evidence for or against this being the case for Graverobber and or Shilo?) would swear by a specific god, either for a certain situation or just one they prefer to swear by, rather than saying "gods" (my Latin textbooks gave me the impression that Hercules was a favorite for this with Romans, though I could be wrong...)

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alchemistpotion August 23 2010, 14:00:22 UTC
I am totally right there with you.

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sodamn_tragic August 22 2010, 08:07:15 UTC
it held the power to melt her knees like nothing else in the world.

o.O

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alchemistpotion August 23 2010, 14:05:27 UTC
As opposed to you know, all those other things that melt knees.

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