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Theme: Week 1

Jul 15, 2010 18:18

FIRST KISS

Here we go. Rules are here for your references. Happy writing!

Please include anything that you would prefer not/don't want to see written for your prompts (if any).

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giethe July 16 2010, 14:57:31 UTC

Embarrassing and in public.

enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:10:08 UTC

I'm not sure if I made this embarrassing or in public enough, but hope you enjoy it a bit at least |D *Mild cursing ( ... )

Part 2 enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:13:21 UTC

But he liked her best when she was smiling. Like that one right there. Really, genuinely smiling. Not the fake ones - he could tell the difference now. The world felt normal again when Inoue Orihime smiled ( ... )

Part 3 enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:14:58 UTC

He missed slightly, and barely kissed the corner of her mouth, but somehow their rain-covered lips came together. The rain soaked through his shirt. He didn’t notice that or his hair plastering to his head as he pressed into the kiss. His fingers sank into her hair just a bit ( ... )

Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:15:43 UTC

Ichigo’s fist clenched and he was about to bark a comeback when Orihime stepped forward with her hands on her hips. “Morita-san! Kurosaki-kun is a wonderful kisser! And besides, even if he wasn’t, I wouldn’t care. I don’t want anyone else other than him kissing me. So, welcome back, Morita-san, but please get back inside and mind your own business ( ... )

Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; giethe July 17 2010, 08:19:25 UTC

Bwahahahhahaah! Good, very good! I love the whole 'meddling neighbors' idea! You even got their names right! *pats* I heartily approve of this!

Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 July 19 2010, 15:29:33 UTC

Hehe, yay! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you ^^

Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; codegal182 July 18 2010, 12:33:51 UTC

Hahah, those neighbours are such classics. Gotta love friendly neighbours. And that last part when Ichigo came back to round two was great. Loved it alot. *fangirls*

Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 July 19 2010, 15:31:05 UTC

Lol, thanks muchly!!<3

godmodsue August 9 2010, 10:15:16 UTC

Laaaaaate review but HELL'S YEAH, MC-E! A+++ for this story, BEYBEH! Gotta echo everyone else on the neighbors, haha! Love that touch.

Anyway, Mc-E, I'm a-gonna be pimping the fills over at ichi_hime and the FLOL bad_shield pimping thread, so if you don't mind, could you pin a title for this story? It's not mandatory of course! But it'll be easier on my poor management skills (such a messy thing it is already, haha!) if there are titles to separate them.

<3 <3 <3 for you~ *3*

enelya87 August 9 2010, 19:52:24 UTC

Th-Thank you so very much, love!

Ah! Sure thing! Let's see... "If You Like Pina Coladas..." ...because of the "getting caught in the rain" later in the lyrics...no one could every accuse me of being a good title maker |D

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; songsparrw1 October 19 2010, 05:37:27 UTC

LOL @ The neighbors! I loved the delayed reaction. Kinda Hawt, too. You have a perfect sense of the characters.

Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 October 19 2010, 15:28:15 UTC

Aw, thank you so very much! :D Haha, the neighbors were my favorite part to write, definitely |D

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