Theme: Week 1

Jul 15, 2010 18:18

FIRST KISS

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Part 2 enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:13:21 UTC
But he liked her best when she was smiling. Like that one right there. Really, genuinely smiling. Not the fake ones - he could tell the difference now. The world felt normal again when Inoue Orihime smiled.

“Oh!” she suddenly exclaimed, coming to a halt.

Ichigo nearly tripped himself, stumbling backwards to get her back under the umbrella. “What? What?” He followed her big-eyed gaze and slight smile to a couple that had stopped under the protection of a tree and were tightly embraced and ki- Ichigo’s face lit up in bright red. He mumbled under his breath about people and their public displays and glanced at Orihime who was staring at them with her hands clasped to her chest, her cheeks pink.

Suddenly, she snapped out of it and whirled back to face him. “Ah!” She slapped her hands against her cheeks. “What am I doing?!” She ran off and Ichigo rushed to keep up with her, her hands still pressed to her red cheeks. Words were coming out of her mouth, but he couldn’t quite catch them and bent lower. “...so cute though. I’ve always wanted to do that.”

“Do what?”

“Kiss in the rain,” she replied absently.

“Eh?!”

Orihime’s head snapped up and nearly collided with Ichigo’s chin. “Ah! So close! I mean, uh, well, I...”

“You’ve always wanted to k-kiss in the rain?” Ichigo, for the life of him, couldn’t figure out why he needed to be sure of what she’d said.

Her face became a tomato. “Um, well...I...yes...that is, with the person I-I like and well...I’ve always thought it was so romantic. You know, with it cold and wet everywhere except in that person’s arms and- Ah!” She shook her red face. “A-Anyway!” As his brain tried to get back on the tracks and away from thinking about Orihime daydreaming about kissing, and him somehow being that person she was in the rain with, Orihime’s eyes darted about and then she looked at him and smiled.

And his heart sank. She smiled. Didn’t smile. But smiled. Why was she giving him that smile instead of that smile? He didn’t have time to consider it much before she let out an exclamation of surprise.

“Oh goodness, we better hurry! My show is almost ready to start!” Orihime grabbed his wrist and darted off with him in tow. In seconds, they arrived in front of her apartment building and came to a near screeching halt. She whirled around and faced him, her breath coming out in little puffs. “Made it!”

Ichigo swallowed and distractedly rubbed his wrist that had burning sensations prickling his skin where her hand had been. She noticed and her mouth dropped into a small, concerned ‘o’.

“Oh, no! Did I hurt you?”

He frowned in confusion. “Hurt-? Oh!” Ichigo gave her a derisive snort, trying to ignore the blush that crept up his neck, and dropped his wrist. “‘Course not. Like you could hurt me.”

Her lips pressed shut and she puffed out her cheeks in annoyance as her brows drew together. “What do you mean? I’m a lot stronger than I look, you know.”

Mirth tugged lightly at the corner of his mouth as he looked at her irritated expression, and then it slipped back into a full scowl when his gaze fell to her lips. Thoughts and feelings rushed at him; dizzied him.

One thought stood out as his feet stepped forward and his hand let the umbrella drop to the wet ground; he didn’t want her to smile in the way that made his world feel at odds.

He watched her soft brown eyes widen as he stood over her and placed his hands on her puffy cheeks, the air slowly letting out through her pursed lips. He asked himself what the hell he thought he was doing, and then he kissed her.

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Part 3 enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:14:58 UTC
He missed slightly, and barely kissed the corner of her mouth, but somehow their rain-covered lips came together. The rain soaked through his shirt. He didn’t notice that or his hair plastering to his head as he pressed into the kiss. His fingers sank into her hair just a bit.

Orihime finally closed her eyes as she forgot to be shocked and became too preoccupied with the tiny fact that Kurosaki Ichigo was kissing her. In the rain. His jacket felt heavier and heavier on her shoulders as it absorbed the falling drops, but she felt light and warm and dizzy and...and ten times, a hundred times, better than she had ever experienced in her daydreams of this moment.

He pulled away and Orihime’s eyes slowly, dreamily, opened to look at his face. His cheeks were red and he looked a bit perplexed and maybe a bit-

“Good afternoon, Inoue-chan!”

The teens jumped and Orihime searched for the familiar voice as acute embarrassment started to fill her chest. She found her neighbor, finally back from his vacation, leaning out from his window, his arms crossed on the sill, with a cigarette hanging from his mouth and waving at her.

“M-Morita-san!”

He grinned around the rolled paper and shook his finger playfully at her. “What’s this? What have you been up to while I’ve been gone?” He pressed his hand to his chest. “You’re breakin’ my heart, Inoue-chan!”

A loud snort sounded from the next apartment over. Her other neighbor was similarly leaning out his window. “Keep dreaming, Morita.” He looked over at the two and gave Ichigo a critical once-over. “I’ve seen this guy a couple of times, but this is a new development. You and him dating now, Inoue-san?”

“Um, Iwao-san, I...um...” Orihime shifted nervously as Ichigo tugged at his collar and cleared his throat.

“Oh, look at them. Aren’t they the cutest things?”

Orihime and Ichigo whirled around to see an older couple looking at them from underneath a large umbrella. Ichigo muttered, “More neighbors?” And she nodded.

The gentleman harumphed. “What an amateur. Did you see that? He missed.”

Ichigo flushed redder than he already was. “Oi! Who’s the one peeping on the amateurs?”

The woman swatted her companion. “Don’t be rude to the poor boy. I think that was their first kiss and we’re interrupting.”

“But he’s right. You did miss, boy,” Morita chimed in. “Ah, Orihime,” he sighed sadly. “If you’d just have waited for me I would have showed you how a real man kisses.” He clicked his tongue at the shame of it.

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Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 July 16 2010, 23:15:43 UTC
Ichigo’s fist clenched and he was about to bark a comeback when Orihime stepped forward with her hands on her hips. “Morita-san! Kurosaki-kun is a wonderful kisser! And besides, even if he wasn’t, I wouldn’t care. I don’t want anyone else other than him kissing me. So, welcome back, Morita-san, but please get back inside and mind your own business.”

Morita’s mouth dropped open. Ichigo’s mouth was half between a gape and a grin. Iwao-san chuckled and ducked back inside, shutting his window.

Morita shook his head and let out a short laugh. “All right, all right. I know when I must concede defeat. Take care of her, Kurosaki-kun~!” He shut the window with a slap before Ichigo could respond.

Ichigo turned to look back at the couple, but they were gone. He blinked. “Your neighbors are...”

“...friendly?” Orihime offered.

“...Yeah. Friendly.” He coughed and shoved his hands into his pockets, rocking back on his feet. “Uh...”

Orihime pressed her tingling lips together and noticed the rain had slowed to a sprinkle.

“Well, I...” He pulled out a hand and shoved it through his hair, spikes popping up and rain water spraying in all directions. “I guess I’ll see you tomorrow.”

She gave one sharp nod, unable to look at anything except for his shifting feet. She watched his shoes turn around, hesitate, and then walk away. Breath escaped that she’d been holding.

And then footsteps pounded back to her on pavement, bringing her gaze up. He was looking at her with the most indiscernible expression.

“Did you say I was a...a wonderful kisser?” Her eyes grew, but she nodded. “And that you didn’t want to...want to kiss anyone else but me?” Her heart dropped, her face flamed, but she nodded. “Even if I was a bad kisser?” More growing, dropping, and flaming; the nod smaller this time. Ichigo nodded in return. “Okay... Okay. Right. Good.” His tongue darted out to lick his lips, and then he whirled around, setting off again.

She watched him go this time, but then realized that he was leaving with her jacket and without his jacket and his umbrella. Before she could finish debating with herself whether she should call out to him and make the switch, he’d turned back around again and was headed towards her. For his things, she thought.

But he was muttering to himself. “...not good. No, not good at all. Damn...” And then her shoulders were being grabbed and she was being kissed again. Despite her surprise, it was much easier to respond and melt into him the second time around. She could get very used to this sort of thin-

He let her go abruptly, his face remaining close to hers. “Better,” he said, his voice husky and lower than normal. “Definitely better.” He backed away, changed his mind again, kissed her again, and then pulled away with a grin on his face. “See you tomorrow.”

Orihime gave him a dreamy smile in return. “See you tomorrow.”

The dreamy smile remained slathered on her face as she watched him leave with an actual jauntiness in his step. And vaguely wondered if perhaps she hadn’t fallen in that big puddle after all, into an alternate universe where she got kisses from Ichigo. If that was the case, she had no intention of ever leaving this new puddle world.

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; giethe July 17 2010, 08:19:25 UTC
Bwahahahhahaah! Good, very good! I love the whole 'meddling neighbors' idea! You even got their names right! *pats* I heartily approve of this!

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 July 19 2010, 15:29:33 UTC
Hehe, yay! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you ^^

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; codegal182 July 18 2010, 12:33:51 UTC
Hahah, those neighbours are such classics. Gotta love friendly neighbours. And that last part when Ichigo came back to round two was great. Loved it alot. *fangirls*

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 July 19 2010, 15:31:05 UTC
Lol, thanks muchly!!<3

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godmodsue August 9 2010, 10:15:16 UTC
Laaaaaate review but HELL'S YEAH, MC-E! A+++ for this story, BEYBEH! Gotta echo everyone else on the neighbors, haha! Love that touch.

Anyway, Mc-E, I'm a-gonna be pimping the fills over at ichi_hime and the FLOL bad_shield pimping thread, so if you don't mind, could you pin a title for this story? It's not mandatory of course! But it'll be easier on my poor management skills (such a messy thing it is already, haha!) if there are titles to separate them.

<3 <3 <3 for you~ *3*

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enelya87 August 9 2010, 19:52:24 UTC
Th-Thank you so very much, love!

Ah! Sure thing! Let's see... "If You Like Pina Coladas..." ...because of the "getting caught in the rain" later in the lyrics...no one could every accuse me of being a good title maker |D

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; songsparrw1 October 19 2010, 05:37:27 UTC
LOL @ The neighbors! I loved the delayed reaction. Kinda Hawt, too. You have a perfect sense of the characters.

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Re: Part 4 D: Final part |D;; enelya87 October 19 2010, 15:28:15 UTC
Aw, thank you so very much! :D Haha, the neighbors were my favorite part to write, definitely |D

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