Several YOUs
First one, fandom specific to Persona:
YOU. You called Maya a mary-sue. Yes, she is an editor, and yes, she is pretty (in many's opinion), and nice.
But let's go over the facts. Maya is selfless as hell, and person-oriented. Arguing with the rabbit? You obviously paid no attention to the game. She made the rabbit for her deceased father. She can't do her makeup, cook, clean, pick out clothing, and OH THE LIST COULD GO ON. Driving in particular.
She's fairly normal. And no, Maya CAN NOT speak English. Note that her CURRENT English is horrible. Ulala can.
Now let's examine your character, let's call her Victoria.
Victoria waltzes in on high-heeled shoes, in a slinky red dress with smoky eyes and dark hair. You describe her as "gorgeous enough to captivate any man and make him fawn, even the most by-the-book cops." It's canon that Katsuya has a crush on Maya. Stop ruining Tatsuya's childhood. You say her eyes are "half-lidded and sparkling green. Eyeshadow, in a smoky blue color cakes the lid." That just gives me bad mental images. You instantly come to Maya with an issue of coolest and start cussing her out. And then you accuse her of being in a relationship with Jun.
Wtf? Jun is gay, in this game, even if some people consider him not to be. I don't reply. I haven't replied since. At least you're baking off.
No Love,
Maya-neesan.
Person 2: Your characters are interesting and well done. Your typing could improve, but you're sweet and I like you.
SO STOP CALLING ME "BABE".
I am not your girlfriend, we aren't personally close, back off.
No Love,
The Personified Dildo.
Person 3:
Stop making all of your characters really touch or really wussy. Mine get bored easily.
Love,
a ninja.
YOU. You called Maya a mary-sue. Yes, she is an editor, and yes, she is pretty (in many's opinion), and nice.
But let's go over the facts. Maya is selfless as hell, and person-oriented. Arguing with the rabbit? You obviously paid no attention to the game. She made the rabbit for her deceased father. She can't do her makeup, cook, clean, pick out clothing, and OH THE LIST COULD GO ON. Driving in particular.
She's fairly normal. And no, Maya CAN NOT speak English. Note that her CURRENT English is horrible. Ulala can.
Now let's examine your character, let's call her Victoria.
Victoria waltzes in on high-heeled shoes, in a slinky red dress with smoky eyes and dark hair. You describe her as "gorgeous enough to captivate any man and make him fawn, even the most by-the-book cops." It's canon that Katsuya has a crush on Maya. Stop ruining Tatsuya's childhood. You say her eyes are "half-lidded and sparkling green. Eyeshadow, in a smoky blue color cakes the lid." That just gives me bad mental images. You instantly come to Maya with an issue of coolest and start cussing her out. And then you accuse her of being in a relationship with Jun.
Wtf? Jun is gay, in this game, even if some people consider him not to be. I don't reply. I haven't replied since. At least you're baking off.
No Love,
Maya-neesan.
Person 2: Your characters are interesting and well done. Your typing could improve, but you're sweet and I like you.
SO STOP CALLING ME "BABE".
I am not your girlfriend, we aren't personally close, back off.
No Love,
The Personified Dildo.
Person 3:
Stop making all of your characters really touch or really wussy. Mine get bored easily.
Love,
a ninja.