Dear RP partner,
Judging by your first post, I thought you were going to be an awesome player.
You started out with an awesome post. A bit fruity and purple prose-y, but that's okay, I can work with that. For max. entertainment, I shall post your post here.
Aristocratic perfection. Simplicity at its finest. With this dark figure sitting in silence, distanced from the noisy crowds of bustling furres with mighty dark wings folded tightly against his back. As though begging to be hidden from sight. Long ivory locks of hair tied with a violet cloth to rest ever so neatly upon the back of this panthers neck. Astonishing fading eyes cast oh so carelessly towards the glass of amber liquor in hand as he swirls the liquid with mild interest. Little can raise the interest of a heavy heart, from days long since passed. No words dare part this creatures precious dark thin lips, as an unfelt draft lifts the cape draped upon his shoulders, caressing the white shirt underneath. Little can be made out from a distance about him other than he was trying to stay hidden.
The fact that your character description is different (for one, you are not a panther and your character is a streetfighter, not aristocratic perfection) should have set off some warning bells.
Enfin. Your post degrades to this; three posts in:
Vincent Dante Botticelli tilted his head looking at her for a moment and smiled a bit laughign at her, "No im not thena gian im not always flirtign so I wouldnt know." His words seemed picked and peiced together trying his best not to seem stupid, "Anyways Rumer... or was it Rumah... Honestly couldnt tell but Im Vincent." He stated softly hand extended to her for a moment slowly it waited as if askign her to grip it lightl
What is this gibberish? How am I even going to have to respond to this? Most importantly, did you just fucking copy someone's opening post and use it as your own? How lazy is that?
Also, use spellcheck, you moron. English isn't even my first language and I spell better than you do.
No love,
Your disgruntled partner.
You started out with an awesome post. A bit fruity and purple prose-y, but that's okay, I can work with that. For max. entertainment, I shall post your post here.
Aristocratic perfection. Simplicity at its finest. With this dark figure sitting in silence, distanced from the noisy crowds of bustling furres with mighty dark wings folded tightly against his back. As though begging to be hidden from sight. Long ivory locks of hair tied with a violet cloth to rest ever so neatly upon the back of this panthers neck. Astonishing fading eyes cast oh so carelessly towards the glass of amber liquor in hand as he swirls the liquid with mild interest. Little can raise the interest of a heavy heart, from days long since passed. No words dare part this creatures precious dark thin lips, as an unfelt draft lifts the cape draped upon his shoulders, caressing the white shirt underneath. Little can be made out from a distance about him other than he was trying to stay hidden.
The fact that your character description is different (for one, you are not a panther and your character is a streetfighter, not aristocratic perfection) should have set off some warning bells.
Enfin. Your post degrades to this; three posts in:
Vincent Dante Botticelli tilted his head looking at her for a moment and smiled a bit laughign at her, "No im not thena gian im not always flirtign so I wouldnt know." His words seemed picked and peiced together trying his best not to seem stupid, "Anyways Rumer... or was it Rumah... Honestly couldnt tell but Im Vincent." He stated softly hand extended to her for a moment slowly it waited as if askign her to grip it lightl
What is this gibberish? How am I even going to have to respond to this? Most importantly, did you just fucking copy someone's opening post and use it as your own? How lazy is that?
Also, use spellcheck, you moron. English isn't even my first language and I spell better than you do.
No love,
Your disgruntled partner.