I'm back! And I've finally edited the bits and bobs you pointed out to me, so thanks very much for that!
Now for your review...
"Loved the tension when Gabe dropped that bombshell! If he'd only known the truth about who/what Clark is, how the redK affected him, and what it made him do to Chloe, he'd have showed up at the house with a shotgun and Kryptonite shells!"
...and a greenK laced chainsaw with Duracell batteries!!! Poor Gabe, completely clueless is he, and completely clueless shall he remain. Chloe can't possibly tell him the truth now. It just would help matters At. All.
"Chloe and Clark have gone a long way toward forgiving one another but she's not ready to live with him. That's what makes this so great."
I know, right? I'm so eeeeeeeeevil!!!!!! :-D
" I can't wait to see how Chloe really feels about this! I can't wait for more and you JUST posted this chapter, LOL"Hee! Well, the good news is that I couldn't wait to write it either, so write it I did. It should be ready for posting tomorrow once I've
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Ok, how i possible that internet at home works better than internet at work?! I tried post this review 3 time... Anyway, chapter is amazing, so Chloe will be living with Kents and Jonathan is comfortable with this... I can't wait for next chapter and their talk ;-).
Ok, how i possible that internet at home works better than internet at work?! I tried post this review 3 time...
Aww, sorry! It's so annoying when that happens. *hugs*
Anyway, chapter is amazing, so Chloe will be living with Kents and Jonathan is comfortable with this...
Heh. Actually, I said that Jonathan is NOT comfortable with this at all. He was, unfortunately, put in a difficult position by Gabe Sullivan's plea for help, and it was almost impossible for him to refuse. He agreed to help out, but he wasn't happy.
I can't wait for next chapter and their talk ;-)
Thanks so much for another lovely comment, Maddie! :-)
I don't even know where to start... I had a feeling after reading the previous chapter that Gabe was going to ask the Kents to take care of Chloe for him... but I did NOT think the Kents would go for it. I would even have bet Martha would be dead set against it; fearing to put both Clark and Chloe in harm's way if they were in such close proximity to each other day after day! She's going to become a nervous wreck worrying about them
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"I don't even know where to start... I had a feeling after reading the previous chapter that Gabe was going to ask the Kents to take care of Chloe for him... but I did NOT think the Kents would go for it. I would even have bet Martha would be dead set against it; fearing to put both Clark and Chloe in harm's way if they were in such close proximity to each other day after day! She's going to become a nervous wreck worrying about them."
Hee! Her mind must be whirling. On the one hand, I'm sure she was happy to see her son walk through the door after telling them he was definitely prison-bound this time. On the other hand, he walked in with the girl he attacked and her father close behind - and she was barely getting over the shock of that when she suddenly realised she's become surrogate mother to the girl who just tried to drown her son!!! :-O
Yeesh, that's twisted, even for me... :-S
"(..btw, sorry I didn't leave a comment after the last chapter... yet, anyway... but I was truly in shock after that little cliffie, and almost
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Will respond in detail after work. Thanks for commenting, hun! :-)
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Now for your review...
"Loved the tension when Gabe dropped that bombshell! If he'd only known the truth about who/what Clark is, how the redK affected him, and what it made him do to Chloe, he'd have showed up at the house with a shotgun and Kryptonite shells!"
...and a greenK laced chainsaw with Duracell batteries!!! Poor Gabe, completely clueless is he, and completely clueless shall he remain. Chloe can't possibly tell him the truth now. It just would help matters At. All.
"Chloe and Clark have gone a long way toward forgiving one another but she's not ready to live with him. That's what makes this so great."
I know, right? I'm so eeeeeeeeevil!!!!!! :-D
" I can't wait to see how Chloe really feels about this! I can't wait for more and you JUST posted this chapter, LOL"Hee! Well, the good news is that I couldn't wait to write it either, so write it I did. It should be ready for posting tomorrow once I've ( ... )
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I tried post this review 3 time...
Anyway, chapter is amazing, so Chloe will be living with Kents and Jonathan is comfortable with this...
I can't wait for next chapter and their talk ;-).
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I tried post this review 3 time...
Aww, sorry! It's so annoying when that happens. *hugs*
Anyway, chapter is amazing, so Chloe will be living with Kents and Jonathan is comfortable with this...
Heh. Actually, I said that Jonathan is NOT comfortable with this at all. He was, unfortunately, put in a difficult position by Gabe Sullivan's plea for help, and it was almost impossible for him to refuse. He agreed to help out, but he wasn't happy.
I can't wait for next chapter and their talk ;-)
Thanks so much for another lovely comment, Maddie! :-)
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Hee! Her mind must be whirling. On the one hand, I'm sure she was happy to see her son walk through the door after telling them he was definitely prison-bound this time. On the other hand, he walked in with the girl he attacked and her father close behind - and she was barely getting over the shock of that when she suddenly realised she's become surrogate mother to the girl who just tried to drown her son!!! :-O
Yeesh, that's twisted, even for me... :-S
"(..btw, sorry I didn't leave a comment after the last chapter... yet, anyway... but I was truly in shock after that little cliffie, and almost ( ... )
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