Lithium
Title: Lithium
Author: yesunglover
Length: Oneshot
Rating: R
Pairing: Heechul x Yesung
Summary: He had been a bit off that day, a little too loud and a little too high. I thought he was a bit mad smiling the way he did. I noticed how fast he was going but the wind whipping through my hair was all too refreshing and there wasn’t any traffic going up Ansan anyway ( Read more... )
Author: yesunglover
Length: Oneshot
Rating: R
Pairing: Heechul x Yesung
Summary: He had been a bit off that day, a little too loud and a little too high. I thought he was a bit mad smiling the way he did. I noticed how fast he was going but the wind whipping through my hair was all too refreshing and there wasn’t any traffic going up Ansan anyway ( Read more... )
Tbh, I read the whole thing again and I cringed on a lot of parts, well majority of it actually haha and that one giant sentence in a paragraph thing, sigh, I don't even know why I write like that even though I've told myself it's not a good thing, so I'm not a fan of my language usage and word structure myself and English being my second language is not really an excuse isn't it? But I'm glad you think it was okay ^ ^
I did thought of it but I don't know where to fit it in since I was aiming for a Yesung centric rather than on both characters. And since I was winging it, I'm not sure how a severely depressed person would be like so rather than botching it up I forgo it instead.
Yeah, I used the word 'oblivion' I love that word. I don't even know why. And after reading the fic once more, I felt it was the only word that saved this piece from a total screw up. Do I make sense?
YUM! COOKIE! I didn't want to in the first place so I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading/commenting *hugs*
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