#01 - for errant_evermore, from your secret santa!

[b1a4ss_mods]

Title: commonplace love letters
For: errant_evermore
Pairing/Focus: CNU/Sandeul
Rating: R
Word Count: 4k
Summary: Nothing is written about how he wants attention, or how he knows that he already has the eyes of the only person who matters. It’s just about a murderer and an escape.
Notes/Warnings: Murders, slight gore, and no major character death. I hope this fic

Comments

[sai12]

Oh my god. So creepy. Like.... Wow can't picture cute fluffy bright little deul doing those things

[portaldice]

haha, thank you for reading and commenting! c:

[errant_evermore]

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This is brilliant and I lovelovelove ittt. I am on a mobile device run but I will come give it a proper review tomorrow, for now?

INCOHERENT SCREAMING.

[lee_junghwan]

SCREAMS this is so good and so creepy wow

i literally got shivers up and down my spine wow good job omg ;u;

[portaldice]

thank you! ^^

[hime_ofthe_moon]

I couldn't help but comment because WOW! :O I am just speechless. Really good fic ;u; Deullie is a murderer but somehow I can still read this character as him and you killed Channie and Jinyoung but TTuTT still, and the ending criessss.

For some reason, I couldn't stop thinking about Shinwoo's characterization but after a few rereads (Yes, I reread it) I realized that it was because all along, Shinwoo and Deullie are also kind of alike when it comes to Deul being able to kill people, with Shinwoo doing that morbid writing metaphor that sounds really well thought out and his blunted reactions to the murders (except Channie's) and the fact that he just killed Jinyoung (My bias, criesss ;u;). And it looks like Deul picked up on that with that quote of his with Watson, where they share something. I'm just oh my gosh. Or maybe I'm like Shinwoo with an overreacting brain but wowwww this is just really amazing, there are many other subtle things too that tie it together and AAAAAAAAH really

[portaldice]

lol girl no i don't write for exo .______. i didn't even change the title formatting why don't you recognize me ;;;;;

and yep, detached tone is because shinwoo and deullie are kind of alike, birds of the same feather escape together, etc.

thank you for the essay lol ;w;

[crystal_halo19]

This was mindblowing. Like wow. I can't come up with the right words to describe this. The way you did murderer!Sandeul was amazing, like it combined his sweetness and overall adorable personality with this deranged hunger for death, I was legitimately scared by him by the first few paragraphs. When I read the part about his eyes being "bright and affectionate and sharp like razor blades" it was like I knew I definitely wouldn't be able to put this down until I finished it.

I thought it would end with something like Junghwan revealing himself to Dongwoo and killing him once his name had been fully formed, but then it changed and I thought it would end up that Dongwoo had been the murderer all along (I have the weirdest theories I'm sorry >.<) but I was totally blown away by the real ending. I never would have thought that JINYOUNG was the mastermind behind it all along. Oh oh oh and badass!Jinyoung was done fantastically. I bought every single word of it :P I'm having this internal fangirling thing over it right now. I just can't

[portaldice]

lol tbh i want to write more badass jinyoung and badass b1a4 in general, haha ^^ and i'll try to write more b1a4 in the future! thank you very much ;w;