#01 - for errant_evermore, from your secret santa!

Dec 25, 2012 14:56

Title: commonplace love letters
For: errant_evermore
Pairing/Focus: CNU/Sandeul
Rating: R
Word Count: 4k
Summary: Nothing is written about how he wants attention, or how he knows that he already has the eyes of the only person who matters. It’s just about a murderer and an escape.
Notes/Warnings: Murders, slight gore, and no major character death. I hope this fic ( Read more... )

pairing: cnu/sandeul, *cycle:2012

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crystal_halo19 December 26 2012, 14:36:32 UTC
This was mindblowing. Like wow. I can't come up with the right words to describe this. The way you did murderer!Sandeul was amazing, like it combined his sweetness and overall adorable personality with this deranged hunger for death, I was legitimately scared by him by the first few paragraphs. When I read the part about his eyes being "bright and affectionate and sharp like razor blades" it was like I knew I definitely wouldn't be able to put this down until I finished it.

I thought it would end with something like Junghwan revealing himself to Dongwoo and killing him once his name had been fully formed, but then it changed and I thought it would end up that Dongwoo had been the murderer all along (I have the weirdest theories I'm sorry >.<) but I was totally blown away by the real ending. I never would have thought that JINYOUNG was the mastermind behind it all along. Oh oh oh and badass!Jinyoung was done fantastically. I bought every single word of it :P I'm having this internal fangirling thing over it right now. I just can't keep still and I've been spasming about this fic to my sister for the past fifteen minutes, and she has no idea what I'm talking about.

But seriously what I love the best is the way you made the romance part of the story flow so amazingly well with the mystery plot. Normally they're like two different aspects, but somehow here you managed to combine it so perfectly I'm fangirling again I really can't take it this story is so amazing asdfghjkl

I have to ask that you keep writing B1A4, like PLEASE pretty please with a cherry and rainbow sprinkles on top because this is so amazing you are amazing your writing is amazing so don't stop your amazing writing kays okay I shan't bother you any longer.

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portaldice January 2 2013, 02:55:57 UTC
lol tbh i want to write more badass jinyoung and badass b1a4 in general, haha ^^ and i'll try to write more b1a4 in the future! thank you very much ;w;

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