#1 - For Fourcoldpaws, From Your Secret Santa!

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Title: Lost Boys...
For: fourcoldpaws
Pairing: Baro/CNU, Baro/Gongchan
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,394
Warning: [Highlight *spoilers*] Character Death, suicide,
Summary: Baro is trying to deal with the biggest change he has had to face, but is it really worth it?
A/N: Merry Christmas fourcoldpaws!!! I hope you like it :3 The rating is due to the darkness of

Comments

[fourcoldpaws]

aaaah so happy you picked this prompt!! wow this is really interesting, i like what you made of the premise - that it happens to many people, the hospitals and having to keep it a secret. there was something delicious sinister about the secret part, with the "You know you're going to have to be him if you want to stay as a doctor here" and the "I have to be with you, I will be found out if we break up."

i really like how you worked with the differences between the different versions of them, both the names (although it took me a moment to notice lol) and stuff like the teeth and the confidence. also He was a lot of things that Baro had wished Dongwoo had been, but just that fact made him dislike it. is wow such a great line bec it felt so real, like that's exactly what would happen in a situation like this. also really liked Shinwoo looked at him with eyes that were the same as Dongwoo's bec it felt so strong, rly illustrated this whole theme of them looking exactly the same but there's still a difference between them, that maybe

[sai12]

That was really interesting although I have to admit I was rather confused at first. But I guess everyone changes anyway huh? This just was drastic changing. I just wish it didn't have to end the way it did.