Sophomore Year, Chapter 6
It's been a rather crazy time at work, where I haven't really had the time to just sit and concentrate. I've been having a rather long block on this story and even wrote a shorter Jaemin drabble to try and figure out what I want to do here, but it didn't really come out until now. Though even now, I'm not really sure how I feel about this chapter
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First of all, any literature about university life is my favorite since that's my life too and there's something so comforting about being able to identify with what I'm reading. I think about how nice it would be to come home to Jaejoong after class or to go out clubbing with Changmin or walk in on YooSu sex.
Your story is very very good, even if it's not planned as you say. I think that gives it more spontaneity which makes it more life-like (since life is so rarely orderly, huh?). I like your characterizations immensely! Changmin is so cute. Jaejoong suave (and mysterious) and sexy. Junsu is darling, even cuter with Yoochun. Yunho is Yunho haha I don't really have an opinion on him right now but I'm sure I love him too.
So, people can make up good stories and that's great and that's what you do but it's the rare person that can make a good story and write it well but you do this. You're writing is fabulous. It's lovely--your words, descriptions, dialogues--it's all wonderful. I love it.
Sorry for the lengthiness of this comment ^^;; I just wanted to say how much I like your story so far and I'm excited to be able to continue in the coming days.
Oh, and also, you have this way of writing scenes that just stick out in my head so well. Your writing is light and just somehow perfect. Like, so many writers get bogged down trying to throw every word they can manage to make a description but something about your writing is just so natural that--I don't know--it just seems real to me. Anyway (how did I go off on a tangent again?) I loved Changmin walking in on the not-so-cool Junsu and Yoochun. It's so vivid to me haha I just love the way the three of them handled that situation.
HOKAY enough rambling!
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awww~~yeah, this was probably my first dbsk fanfic start, so I wanted to write it on something I knew. haha, I agree; it would definitely be nice to enjoy college life with the boys.
wow, XDDDD. I'm so happy you're enjoying it so much! I'm always curious to see what styles people like and this fic is one of my more fluffier ones. Thank you!!! *blushes* I don't know what to say; your comments blew me away! LOL, gosh, sorry for the corny rhyme there.
The style here is definitely lighter, more silly, and simpler, so I always wonder how people will take it. I'm glad it works for you ^_^ Natural writing wow :DDD really? that's what I think most writers aim for, that the world they create feels even just a little bit believable and real.
*grins* You can ramble anytime hahah, even if it's totally unrelated.
thank you so much for reading and for you lovely comment!! I hope you can enjoy the other chapters :DDD
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