NOTE:  If you just want to read the fanfic bit, and not the bit where I get angsty and mad and rant and rave, stop at the paragraph that begins "In many ways."  So I posted that chapter of Irrevocable.  Silly me.  I always get my hopes up.  It's been a day and no one's reviewed.  I feel kind of stupid for feeling bad about it.  I mean, really, it's ( Read more... )