New here...

Jun 23, 2007 17:16

Ah ^_^;; I just joined but I've been hanging around haunting the place for a while...

It didn't say I had to ask permission or anything anywhere I could find on here so...

Anyway. I brought a piece offering. It's my very first Weiss fanfiction and my first Shounen-ai...and it really doesn't have anything...

Gah you can tell I'm not used to this can't you -.-;

Here it is.

YinYang Oneshot

Warning!! It was written at midnight and worked on non-stop for three hours (I knew that if I stopped I'd probably never finish it) So at this point I'd only had a maximum of five hours sleep in two days and by the time I was ending this thing I just wanted it GONE.

So the characters are completely skewered, probably some little grammatical arrors and nothing makes a lot of sense...but it's my first one and I thought I could use it to get some critique to put into another story if I ever make one again...



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