just being self-indulgent, is all

[ayame_hadouken]

So this came about from a combination of getting lost on pixiv with je_levy, and ensuing discussion of certain almost-fetishistic clothing choices. Pure self-indulgence (perhaps at its finest).

A Cheeky Sort of Fellow
Taguchi Junnosuke/Tanaka Koki
NC-17-- roleplaying meta-cosplay, body paint, light bondage, probably historical and clothing-type fallacies (

Comments

[yue_akuma]

HELL TO THE YEAH for Koki painting on Junno, then roleplay, and they just seem to be like mind twins or something *_____*

Me likey very mucho! It's all hot and awesomecakes! ♥

[ayame_hadouken]

:D (maybe they are, just a tiny tiny bit.)

thank you very much! <3<3

[je_levy]

YOU GET HEART PEEN BECAUSE THIS IS LATE AND I HAVE INCOHERENT FEELS FOR THIS THAT DESTROYS THE CONSTRUCT OF WORDS FOR EXPRESSION. IF I WERE THERE OR YOU WERE HERE, I'D PROBABLY JUST DO AN INTERPRETIVE DANCE TO CONVEY THE GASPS AND WRITHES OF 'OMGOSH LAWD THIS IS SO HOT' YOU CAUSED BY WRITING THIS STARRY-EYE WORTHY MASTERPIECE

Sorry this is coming so late. i read this twice last night and was all verbally keysmashy over it and needed to be wide awake and mentally present for any wordly flail.

But yesh~ Lawd almighty. You know, I think keeping it meta was the BEST idea because ughh there was this point during the read where it seemed both natures blended and the character breaks were just so startlingly hot. At some point it felt like Kin's likes and wants were exactly the same as Junno's, but yes I'll get to that in a moment. First let me tell you my favourite parts.

During concerts, Junno and Koki spend a lot of time looking at each other. It’s just something that happens,and of course they still manage to be aware of their

[je_levy]

MORE PEEN BECAUSE PEEN IS PROSE LOVE. ASK THE EXPERTS.

i didn't realise that them brainstorming how the scene would play out would be just as hot as the scene itself too *A*)/ JUST GAH.

What I also love about this is how you transitioned them into the roleplay. Their casual al fresco dinner and the little glimpse we see of Kin-sama. God. And I particularly love how Koki goes quiet and servile as Ren, and he gets this sort of naive softness and it's so perfect. Plus you wrote it so we're not wholly sure how Koki feels until we're given this very blazing moment where he says.

Keep going, Junno, please.”
Like I said fdjkfnjkfgn character breaks = very good. Gosh.

“You’ll put your mouth to good use first, Ren-chan.” *________* my jaw dropped. Also the paragraph before this as well where he touches Ren's lips. Augh

[ayame_hadouken]

Augh, I've kind of been basking in all the sparklepeen and word noises you left me, and grinning so hard my face hurts. Honestly I'm still kind of hung up on IF I WERE THERE OR YOU WERE HERE, I'D PROBABLY JUST DO AN INTERPRETIVE DANCE TO CONVEY THE GASPS AND WRITHES, just >.< <3<3<3 augh

You know, I think keeping it meta was the BEST idea because ughh there was this point during the read where it seemed both natures blended and the character breaks were just so startlingly hot

Thank you; I know we sort of talked over ways to make this fic happen, and at the time it seemed like keeping it meta would be taking the easy way out (at least to me). However, I really am pleased with the way it came out; I'm not sure this would have worked quite as well for me had I used inexplicable magic to make it happen.

I was chortling over this simply because itreminded me of their awkward staring moment. They thinkthey're being mindful of the audience :BHahahaa, I loved getting to hear all the snippets of concert-happenings, and yeah, them making

[ayame_hadouken]

i didn't realise that them brainstorming how the scene would play out would be just as hot as the scene itself too *A*)/ JUST GAH.

What I also love about this is how you transitioned them into the roleplay. [...] Like I said fdjkfnjkfgn character breaks = very good. Gosh.

I didn't think that the negotiations, as it were, could be just as fun as the actual scene; I'm glad you found them just as hot. I really wasn't sure what way would be best for them to start, nor how Junno would make sure everything was okay without taking away from the action, so I'm so very glad that it worked in a way that didn't detract from what was happening.

*________* my jaw dropped. Also the paragraph before this as well where he touches Ren's lips. Augh