just being self-indulgent, is all
So this came about from a combination of getting lost on pixiv with je_levy, and ensuing discussion of certain almost-fetishistic clothing choices. Pure self-indulgence (perhaps at its finest).
A Cheeky Sort of Fellow
Taguchi Junnosuke/Tanaka Koki
NC-17-- roleplaying meta-cosplay, body paint, light bondage, probably historical and clothing-type fallacies ( ( Read more... )
A Cheeky Sort of Fellow
Taguchi Junnosuke/Tanaka Koki
NC-17-- roleplaying meta-cosplay, body paint, light bondage, probably historical and clothing-type fallacies ( ( Read more... )
i didn't realise that them brainstorming how the scene would play out would be just as hot as the scene itself too *A*)/ JUST GAH.
What I also love about this is how you transitioned them into the roleplay. Their casual al fresco dinner and the little glimpse we see of Kin-sama. God. And I particularly love how Koki goes quiet and servile as Ren, and he gets this sort of naive softness and it's so perfect. Plus you wrote it so we're not wholly sure how Koki feels until we're given this very blazing moment where he says.
Keep going, Junno, please.”
Like I said fdjkfnjkfgn character breaks = very good. Gosh.
“You’ll put your mouth to good use first, Ren-chan.”
*________* my jaw dropped. Also the paragraph before this as well where he touches Ren's lips. Augh.
And then he TIES HIM UP. Just, so much incoherence and the way it was described. So much unf plus the dialogue. Dirty talk ftw. I seriously just couldn't anymore. I spent the rest of it just wide-eyed and awed by how Kin kept thinking of the way his 'playthings' usually are and somehow it seemed that Junno was thinking the same. idek :'D sooo perfect. Ugh god of words, give me more adjectives~~
Junno looks over his shoulder at Koki, unable to keep the mirth from his voice.
“Ren-chan, are you up for round two? I think there are ways we can use your tailor’s implements creatively.”
Koki whimpers behind him.
I may have cackled some. No way to be certain.
But seriously~~ oh lord. This was everything i could hope for in a roleplay denden fic from you and so much more than that. It was just so much endless hot and your words and things i can't quote since it'd just be me keysmashing or attempting to use vowel-heavy assemblages of letters to convey the glee-noises I made at it. Still, yes, i need you to know this was AMAZING <3<3<3<3<3
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You know, I think keeping it meta was the BEST idea because ughh there was this point during the read where it seemed both natures blended and the character breaks were just so startlingly hot
Thank you; I know we sort of talked over ways to make this fic happen, and at the time it seemed like keeping it meta would be taking the easy way out (at least to me). However, I really am pleased with the way it came out; I'm not sure this would have worked quite as well for me had I used inexplicable magic to make it happen.
I was chortling over this simply because itreminded me of their awkward staring moment. They thinkthey're being mindful of the audience :B
Hahahaa, I loved getting to hear all the snippets of concert-happenings, and yeah, them making EVERYONE feel like awkward third wheels is still sort of hilarious.
You described this perfectly *________*asdjhfjsjsdfk
asldkfjasdf, thanks >.< especially since when we watched it I only had the vaguest idea of words happening and basically only had actions to go on.
There's just something so vivid about this moment. I can soo totally see them experiencing this and especially with Koki's lip-twitching. So adorable augh
Yeah, I can totally see this being something that passes between them for real.
Junno knows how to pick them, as the saying goes; he’s modest, to boot.
LOL <3
Hahaha, I kind of love Junno the cocky, self-assured jerk-ass. <3
This little gem, oh god :'D
I think you should know that I'm still vaguely unsettled by that Majissuka screencap you sent me a couple weeks back. :'D
>.< Because of course he did lol
Always prepared, that one. Especially when there's potential for sex. :B
I also love that you added little details about the way Junno views Koki and the things he says and does. It gave the whole fic such a very nice touch. An element of fluff in the subtext [...] ;A; Ninja feels.
Augh, I'm so pleased you caught and mentioned this-- especially since I tend to stay away from overt feels. >.< Usually I don't like to muck about with that sort of thing, because it can get too overblown and ridiculous, and not in the sort of ways that I like. <3<3<3
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What I also love about this is how you transitioned them into the roleplay. [...] Like I said fdjkfnjkfgn character breaks = very good. Gosh.
I didn't think that the negotiations, as it were, could be just as fun as the actual scene; I'm glad you found them just as hot. I really wasn't sure what way would be best for them to start, nor how Junno would make sure everything was okay without taking away from the action, so I'm so very glad that it worked in a way that didn't detract from what was happening.
*________* my jaw dropped. Also the paragraph before this as well where he touches Ren's lips. Augh.
And then he TIES HIM UP. Just, so much incoherence and the way it was described. So much unf plus the dialogue. Dirty talk ftw. I seriously just couldn't anymore. I spent the rest of it just wide-eyed and awed by how Kin kept thinking of the way his 'playthings' usually are and somehow it seemed that Junno was thinking the same. idek :'D sooo perfect. Ugh god of words, give me more adjectives~~
:D Again, I'm so glad, especially because it was a little challenging to think of something that wasn't too complex and potentially very technical. And also yay because sometimes I am not friends with dialogue and sometimes I have moments of doubt over the dirty talk. >.< just, augh <3 :'D <3
I may have cackled some. No way to be certain.
Hah, I may have been endlessly amused by that as well. The world will never know for sure, though.
This was everything i could hope for in a roleplay denden fic from you and so much more than that. It was just so much endless hot and your words and things i can't quote since it'd just be me keysmashing or attempting to use vowel-heavy assemblages of letters to convey the glee-noises I made at it. Still, yes, i need you to know this was AMAZING <3<3<3<3<3
I just need you to know that this whole comment is still giving me the warm fuzzies and I'm so so glad (and running out of words, of course >.<). Seriously the only real response I have for this is the urge to roll around in my bed gleefully. In lieu of actually rolling around though, allow me to indulge in the keysmash of happy: aldjflalgjdfdjgakdfaldsfjdald :D :D <3<3<3<3<3
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