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yoru_no_hikaru in author_paradise

[One-shot] Push the button

Jan 05, 2016 03:12

Title: Push the button
Pairing: Sakumoto
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don’t own any characters
Warnings: Swearing, a bit of making out
Summary: A long-forgotten item suddenly appears again and reminds Jun of things he really doesn’t want to think about. But then, how come it is still around? So Jun decides he needs to confront Sho…

This is for lilly0 I ( Read more... )

c: matsumoto jun, x: drama, r: pg-13, p: matsumoto jun/sakurai sho, l: one-shot, x: romance, c: sakurai sho, g: arashi, x: angst

Comments 10

raene_9 January 5 2016, 03:26:33 UTC

liked it! the SM love-hate-love relationship always made them unique.thanks

yoru_no_hikaru January 6 2016, 22:34:46 UTC

Yes, Sakumoto have that special air between them, which makes them unique. They're such a fun pair to write. :D

I'm glad you like it.

Thanks a lot for reading and for your comment. ^__^

lilly0 January 5 2016, 12:28:21 UTC

WOAH, I LOVE THIS!!
I mean, first of all - I know Jun is pissed and I can understand and all - but it's so cute that Sho carried this button around for all this time. Talking about being in love <3 It's a part of Jun that I really like that he when he is pissed... he can't hide it hundred percent. Is it weird to say I thikn that's... kinda cute ( ... )

yoru_no_hikaru January 6 2016, 23:44:47 UTC

I thought this story up when we were talking about those Sakumoto things and whether Sho actually did receive that button, or not. I was thinking "I wonder what he did with it" and then I thought it would be so aweseome if even after he and Jun didn't get alon gtoo well he would keep carrying it around, wanting it close to him ( ... )

astrangerenters January 6 2016, 00:26:42 UTC

I'm happy they were able to work through all their issues and sordid history to get together - and that when they did, it wasn't easy but they both had to work hard for what they wanted.

I also loved Ohno, Nino, and Aiba's worries about them and strong need for Sho and Jun to be happy together.

yoru_no_hikaru January 6 2016, 22:41:29 UTC

I'm happy too that things worked out between them. Jun felt very reluctant at first, so I was wondering if he would let Sho into his heart, after all. But then, Sho, while being crude sometimes, is a very loving person and so he was winning Jun's heart with his lvoe and dedication.

Yes well, the group dynamics of Arashi are just unique, of course, they would live through the drama with the troubled couple. And of course, Jun and Sho confide in their friends as well.

I'm happy that you enjoyed this. Thanks a lot for reading and for your comment! <3

little_kirin January 6 2016, 17:20:02 UTC

Love this one! <3 The story is strong and I like how in the end it is a romance story where they live happily ever after (hopefully). ;)

yoru_no_hikaru January 6 2016, 22:47:01 UTC

Haha, somehow there's always an "after" after any "happily" when it's Sakumoto, I think. ^^" But then, there's also make-up sex, so. XDDD

I like how they worked their way through the story. Jun's worries and Sho's wariness hold them back at first, but ultimately they want to be together and decide to give it a try. It's not simply, of course, but then, I think simple would bore them, so they're perfect for each other, after all.

Thank you so much for reading this and for writing me a comment. :D

helene_san January 17 2016, 19:29:08 UTC

I liked that they didn't kiss and make up immediatly.
It's an original twist for fanfiction, very refreshing ^^

I also liked how Jun said that they changed and Sho was still in love with an image from the past.
And Sho carried a torch for 10 years, so cute!
But I'm glad they got together in the end anyway!! Yay!

yoru_no_hikaru January 19 2016, 15:02:18 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. <3
Yes, isn't it always a bit too simple to just apologize, or make confessions and even though there's quite a history behind it, suddenly everything's okay and they will kiss and live happily ever after? For this I thought it should be different. After all, if they hit it off again, they know what can be at stake, in case things should not work out. I'm very confident about these two, though, the way they are now. ^^

Yes, Jun is being very mature here. In a way, he is also trying to protect himself, of course. Sho being nostalgic is an image that I like, really. Holding onto something that will remind him of what he missed - it seems quite like him.

I'm happy too that they made their way through this.

Again, thanks a lot for commenting!!! :D