Starting Over: Part 1

[aurilly]

Title: Tea Lounge
Characters/Pairing: Mohinder and Sylar; references to offstage Matt/Mohinder
Rating: PG-13 for language
Words: 2879
Spoilers: This starts up sometime around Truth & Conequences, but I've reimagined Sylar's season 2 storyline and changes a couple of other things (like Nathan's shooting).
Summary: In which Sylar pays Mohinder a visit.

Comments

[squeegee_burble]

Okay, SO many things in this story make me suspect you wrote it with the specific purpose of making me happy.

1) The Tea Lounge! I spend, like, HALF MY LIFE in that place. LOL 7th Ave.
2) Mmmmmohhhinnnnnderrrrr! And!!! LOLOL he smiles at the barista and she drops her coffee LOLOLOLOL awesome.
3) Mohinder had that quintessential Mohinder look on his face of, “Oh my god, this is a ridiculous situation.” Hee.
LOLLERSKATES!!! ILU loads.

[aurilly]

Ok... SO MANY THINGS to say

[squeegee_burble]

Were we really not LJ-friends already?!?! That's a disastrophe!! Friended!

[levitatethis]

I didn't get a chance to read your story until now. I like this very much and am excited it's part 1 (meaning other chapters!). I really enjoy the humour you've infused in both their POVs and the way their own thoughts sometimes reveal things to themselves neither would have expected. Added to that you have a very interesting story going along with regards to the experimentation that went on with Sylar. It's a very nice balancing act of the funny and the serious.

Can't wait for the next part!

[aurilly]

I'm glad you liked it---especially you, since you always write such thoughtful stories. I wasn't really sure how non-crack, non-angst, non-super-powered, non-sexy Mylar would be received. I've never seen a de-powered, un-crazy Sylar who had all of his memories intact but just tried to put all the angst behind him... so I'm glad you don't think it's too out there. It's like they're just two guys, except one is a recovered serial killer. It's going to be more semi-romantic dramedy than anything else, I'm afraid, so I hope you continue to like it.

[aunt_zelda]

Oooooo ... me likes this

[aurilly]

This comment makes me so happy, because you picked out the bits that I was desperately hoping people would find funny (the crazy blonde line, and the part with Mohinder and Sylar talking about soy milk).

Yes you did, dear … *pats him on the head*
I'm beaming right now, because that is precisely the reaction I was hoping that last line would elicit. I'm thrilled it worked the way I wanted it to.

Thanks for reading!

[aunt_zelda]

Welcome! I leave notoriously long comments ...

[ladywilde80]

Even with a broken nose and wearing stupid shirts, Mohinder still managed to make my stomach jump up and say hi to my trachea.

That was the part in the chpt where I kind of clapped my hand over my mouth and giggled like a little kid.

<3

This is cute!

[aurilly]

Hee!

[mithrial]

Shit - this means I need a new icon... ;)

[aurilly]

Hahahaha! Ok, that was hilarious. :)