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Jun 12, 2008 10:39

I seem to have written fic.

It's been a LOONG time, folks, but I suppose now that it's summer my writing gland wants to partay it up. Not only do I have two fics in the making (one in planning stages (a collab) and the other, an Ohmiya, a whopping 13 pages already), but I'm writing a short story that's not even close to being done at 20 pages. This ( Read more... )

i am koyama's double eyelid, yeah i know, omoshiro so, i am a loser, news eats my soul bc i gave it away, shige lives in my academic heart, this pi tag wears a bra, sexy sexy news, jinny jin jin jin, you kids are soo cuurrazzzzyyy!, je fic, ryo is bitch numero uno, mush aloit

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silverrangel June 12 2008, 02:45:36 UTC
I WILL NOW PROCEED WITH OBNOXIOUSLY QUOTING YOUR WRITING BACK AT YOU.

"Can someone shut him the fuck up?" Ryo had perhaps screamed. "Why does Shige have to be the only one who talks his ass off when we drink?"

i need to say right now that i LOVE your ryo. he is exaggerated and over-the-top and probably not at all like the ryo in real life, but he is exactly how i picture him in my head and that's AWESOME! he is like the straight man of a comedy duo, if that straight man were insane.

"Can I stay here?" he asks, resting his head on the nearest solid surface.
"Not on my shoulder," Koyama says, without conviction.

ohhh i love your koyato, you know that? actually, i just realized earlier how koyato was your je OTP, and i don't know if it still is, but you write it extremely well. koyama's quiet suffering is so endearing, it makes me want to give him a hug.

"Screw Koyama's brains out," someone else whispers, and Shige turns slowly to find Ryo glaring at him. "You are such an idiot. I'm even starting to feel sorry for Koyama, which is impossible, so I'm not. But I am."

well, it's no wonder shige didn't figure things out earlier, with bandmates like THAT dropping hints that make NO SENSE.

The correct answer, Shige knows, is that Koyama has been doing his awful charming thing for the past two or so years, and Shige has been stupid enough not to notice until now.

oh god. i just--i love how shige is adorably oblivious to everything, like la la look at me with my problems and virginity and utter lack of lovability (shut up that's a word), while koyama is right there, and always has been. pining, i suppose. but quietly and nicely, and that's what i love, that koyama takes care of shige in spite of how horrible it must feel to have shige not knowing, and worse, not returning his feelings. although it all turned out right in the end, which is quite nice. :D

i loved this fic so much!!! i hope my review wasn't too rambling/nonsensical/stupid or whatever, i did my best to show my glee. :D also, i hope that summer will mean that you will be writing much more prolifically (SAT word--ooh) from now on. ♥

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augustfai June 12 2008, 21:03:53 UTC
YOUR REVIEWS ALWAYS MAKE ME SO JOYFUL. i swear i have read this comment fifty something times and i still love it asdlksadflkdfk. ♥ i swear to god if you STOP leaving me rambly/nonsensical/whatever comments i will hunt you down and appear at the foot of your bed in a reaper costume with kat-tun music blaring from underneath my hood. IT'S A THREAT, K. IT'S A THREAT.

re: the otp thing, YES, koyato is still my je otp, because as far as i am concerned ohmiya is in a whole other category. XD dkfsdalkj thank you i didn't think my koyashige would go over so well but apparently it did.

O AND RYO? YES YES YES. that is how i always see him, which is really spastic and flail-y and pretty much unlike the real softy that he is. but yay for over-the-top, probably-on-crack ryo!

summer means good things--perhaps the banality (another sat word, ooh) of my non-writing days are over for the next few months. ;)

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silverrangel June 12 2008, 23:31:35 UTC
good, because i love writing them! your writing makes me so happy i can't help but write rambly, gleeful little reviews!

you should definitely write a lot this summer. have you realized how long it's been since EITHER of us have posted fiction, fandom or otherwise? god, it's been ages. D:

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augustfai June 12 2008, 23:51:18 UTC
♥♥♥♥! i just automatically, in my head, reconstructed your first sentence into something really awkward, SO UM LET'S MOVE ON WITH OUR LIVES MMKAY.

i will write alot this summer. hopefully. XD i know, it's been so long. 5 + months. maybe even 6+.

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silverrangel June 12 2008, 23:54:45 UTC
TELL ME WHAT IT BECAME. please, for the sake of my sanity. i know i'm just going to go to my us history book, open it, then mutter something like "ok so what is it that she thought?"

or something.

oh my GOD.

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augustfai June 13 2008, 00:07:10 UTC
OKAY, THIS IS HOW I 'FIXED' IT:

'your writing makes me so happy i can't help but pop out rambly, gleeful little babies!'

SO. AWKWARD. DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY. LET'S NOT TALK ABOUT IT.

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silverrangel June 13 2008, 00:56:00 UTC
OH DEAR LORD.

by the way, in case you thought the "oh my GOD" in my last comment was about my burning curiosity, it wasn't. i was actually referring to the not writing thing! um. yeah.

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augustfai June 13 2008, 00:57:16 UTC
I KNOW. I'M SORRY. I'M REALLY SORRY. D:

haha, no, i figured you were talking about the writing. XD

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silverrangel June 13 2008, 00:58:41 UTC
IT'S OKAY. i've once thought a box of pens said "penis", which is just, i mean, they were PENS, how could i have thought the other thing?

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