Sep 02, 2014 14:46
You know what- let's write that tutor story. Except, actually, the story arc is more of a flat line, so now that you've started posting it why don't we scrap this chapter and- yeah I know that means writing two new ones- but before you do that, I'd like to talk to you about that one story you have with the submissive slave owner, that's kind of an interesting twist, why don't you start on that- go ahead, sit down- go on-
Mhm. Mhm. Mhm. Okay well that's a nice first chapter, except it's a little... low-key, don't you think? Kinda quiet? No, no, it's lovely, I'm just thinking wouldn't it be more intense if they clashed a little more, or, you know... I don't know, the guy is much too polite to his slave. I mean that's hardly a servant. Don't get me wrong, I like it. But why don't you start over, just to see where it goes? Hm? Oh but before you do that, remember that pdf file you wanted to make for Stockholm; yeah, you drew that scene break thing, a little divider, and you were quite happy with it at the time but I've looked at it the other day and I think it needs improvement- oh, no, I don't want to talk about Stockholm right now. I know you have half a bonus chapter, actually I gave you half a bonus chapter, why are you bitching? Why don't you do some of the work yourself?
No, don't do that right now. I've been meaning to talk to you about that story with the frog who isn't a frog. I think his name is Ilion, that's Ee-lee-on with a warm twisty feeling and a clicking sound right over here. Anyway I've been thinking about it and I think we can tone it down re: the accepted beastiality thing; see, this scene would work just the same, and this and this and this could easily be changed, and yeah that means we would have to scrap the big clash between them; no, I don't have a replacement. Let me get back to you. In half a year or something. In the meantime I think there needs to be a separate story arc about, y'know, his self-discovery and finding others and whatnot. Except that can't start until halfway through the first story arc. No I don't know how to stretch the first one so that they come to a point at the same time. What's with all these questions? The administrative part is your job.
Why aren't you writing that tutor story? Can I talk to you about knitting? Or, y'know, that thing that actually makes you money?
...Stardust? What's that again?
my moody muse,
froggie,
tutor,
return ticket to stockholm,
sinnian characters,
paulie