Comments | atomic_fiction: usually the result of conflicting tides

v_greyson in atomic_fiction

usually the result of conflicting tides

Mar 11, 2006 22:01

vortex
follows otherwise. context is 97% recommended.
precedes counterglow, which doesn't exist yet, but will soon.
lotrips AU
Bean/Elijah, Orlando, Viggo, David
PG-13
1000 words
I lie, therefore, I disclaim.
for atomic_fiction, prompt was:

everything was ugly but your beautiful face
it left me no illusion
-all because of you

( rising from the rubble and stretching his legs into a new world, and something empty unfolding like wings )

Comments 8

vegetariansushi March 12 2006, 06:24:13 UTC

v_greyson March 12 2006, 14:43:19 UTC

well good, because there is so much omgwtf. i still have to explain who the fuck viggo is, besides crazy mchotass. viggo's magic-psychic-mind-power is totally my favorite, and i am very very excited for getting to flail all over about how VIGGO IS TOTALLY THE SHIT. i feel this story can be summed up as follows ( ... )

vegetariansushi March 12 2006, 20:11:07 UTC

queen_geek March 12 2006, 13:18:11 UTC

*flail*

-Do you trust me? Orlando asked, one day, wide-eyed and blank, lying on the floor of their room. The footsteps were heavy in the corridor, and Sean knew he was next.

Sean flinched as the key scrambled in the lock. -I don't know.

these lines made something feel all funny in my tummy, like impending doom or the ache of missing someone. beautiful.

v_greyson March 12 2006, 14:46:43 UTC

PATHOS YAY

ahem. anyway. thank you, and stuff. that little scene is definitely my favorite thing in this story. orlando doing his best River Tam impression! sean all wee and scared! n'awww.

hi, it's way too early in the morning for the internet.

xsquotessuch April 5 2006, 01:50:48 UTC

This? Fricking awesome!!

Just one question...Where is the rest of this?!??! Tis Brilliant!

v_greyson April 7 2006, 05:30:26 UTC

thanks!

Just one question...Where is the rest of this?!??!

ahh . . . you know . . . waiting somewhere to be written. soon. ish. hopefully.

magnifica7 April 8 2006, 17:44:25 UTC

Again, I'm in distress (in a totally good way!). I hope and fear you will continue this story at the bloody same time!